Hit the Ground Running On Empty (Four Brothers, Bobby/Jack)

[goddamnedstars]

Title: Hit the Ground Running On Empty
Fandom: Four Brothers
Characters: Bobby/Jack
Word Count: 2278
Rating/Warnings: R for non-biological brothercestin'
Notes: Written for yuletide (originally archived here.) Title stolen from an Alkaline Trio song. Concrit makes me happy.

Comments

[newtoyou]

oh that was excellent. i love it.

[quarterturn]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

[riot_fox311]

Oh my god. That was awesome. It was all sad and bittersweet and smexy drunkeness and then you destroy me. For some reason the end made me really really sad. Totally in character though. Basically you just are the awesomest. The end.

[quarterturn]

Wow, thank you. I'm glad it all worked for you and you thought it was in character, I worried about that. And I'm glad it was smexy! I always have the hardest time with that. You totally made my day with this comment. ♥

[riot_fox311]

YAY DAYMAKING! *dances menacingly* Maybe I'm a little hyper right now. *shifty eyes* Yeah, I'm going now. *molests you in a nonthreatening way* Schmoodles.

[quarterturn]

Menacing dancing, huh? That would be a sight to see. :D

Mmm, beez molested. ;)

[lyra_wing]

Ughhh, why do you gotta make it hurt so good?

I love this -- I love the narrative voice in it. It's Bobby, but it's YOUR Bobby, which I might like even better than the canon version.

*big hearts*

[quarterturn]

*scuffs feet* Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[happywriter06]

Man, that was good. I love the end. But Bobby's not going to screw this kid over, and every time he looks at him all he wants is him naked and needy and just broken enough to need a hero. That is my favorite line.

[quarterturn]

Thank you so much! I love when people can pick out a favorite line, that just completely makes my day. Thank you for the feedback! :)

[veiledndarkness]

Angsty and beautiful. Love it.

[quarterturn]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed. :)