afi-but home is nowhere

Apr 10, 2003 20:43

We held hands on the last night on earth. Our mouths filled with dust, we kissed in the fields and under trees, screaming like dogs, bleeding dark into the leaves. IT was empty on the edge of town but we knew everyone floated along the bottom of the river. So we walked through the waste where the road curvfed into the sea and the shattered ( Read more... )

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thespectacle April 10 2003, 20:18:24 UTC
great! good usuage of metaphors and i like the flow.

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godotishere April 11 2003, 13:36:12 UTC
I didn't write it.

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