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[godotishere]

*we are the the sound of silent crashing in the ground, the wondrous beauty of death and moonlit last loves and goodbyes that scream as we all fall down

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[thespectacle]

nice, very descriptive and expressive. i feel it more as prose than poetry; would perfer it in an unstructured way...to give it more flow and stream of conscious.

~~As time passed in thick broken waves~~

this moves me...i like the word play...visually descriptive.

how are you? you seem...well, distant. is not life treating you pleasantly?

[godotishere]

I'm glad you like it...
Yeah, I'm okay...worried about a friend, haven't had any inspiration in a long while....I have to start getting back into the swing of things....I'm working on my style....I need it be more distinct...Well, hopefully I'll post some more soon. How are you?

[thespectacle]

to worry about a friend...compassion.

i am told over and over again, that it is good for a young artist to explore every aspect and style; time will show a distinct flavor.

i am fine...looking forward to the future...a place where i will be challenged...getting back on track of things...yes, good.

[godotishere]

Hey, thanks alot....No, i'm glad you found my journal; i would have given it to you, heh. It means a lot that you like my stuff...even though it's not that great, but anyway, i think your stuff is awesome, so thanks again!! I never thought of starting a website...not a bad idea, but i wouldn't even know how to go about doing that... hmm ::ponders:: oh well, talk to you soon!!