come from behind victory [for haneure]

Jan 08, 2015 11:09

For: haneure

Title: come from behind victory
Pairing(s)/focus: Jackson/Jinyoung
Rating: PG
Word count: 5130
Warnings: N/A
Author's notes: I really liked your second prompt and tried to do the pairing (one of my favorites!) justice. Unfortunately, I’m terrible with deadlines so it’s a bit rushed. I hope you can still find something about it to like!
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pairing: jackson/jr., year: 2015, rating: pg

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chanyeolanda January 8 2015, 17:14:43 UTC
I AM THOROUGHLY CONVINCED THEY ARE ALL PLAYING SOME FORM OF GAY CHICKEN 90% OF THE TIME ANYWAY

ALSO THIS WAS GREAT

JAEBUM'S DEFEAT IN TEH CAR TRYING TO DISSUADE THEM

MARK'S 'HELPFULNESS'

JINYOUNG AND JACKSON'S EVERYTHING

THIS WAS GREAT

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:18:10 UTC
thank you so much for this lovely comment omg ^^ so glad you liked it!!

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nekokonneko January 8 2015, 17:39:46 UTC
Those headings were a great addition, they really helped set the tone of the fic. Jackson is so deliciously characterised and I've been craving some jinson that explores their mutual love of groping each other, so this really hit the spot :D

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:22:06 UTC
the headings were a last minute addition, so I'm super glad you thought they fit! I love jinson so much, thank you for this comment ^^

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akmongs January 8 2015, 19:07:05 UTC
THIS WAS AMAZING BLESS JINSON BLESS YOU
thank you for writing!!!

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:22:15 UTC
thanks for the comment!!

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markerlimes January 8 2015, 19:58:56 UTC
MY GAY CHICKEN OTP. BLESS YOU. ♥♥♥

this was fantastic! thank you so much for this delightful fic. jackson being competitive 'gotta win them all'!jackson is /so/ canon. whether it's gay chicken, fanservice to the nth degree, whatever he's got to win it. and then your jinyoung!! he's perceptive, complex and your jinson works so well bc while jackson is this gigantic force of determination ready to declare "gimme death or gay chicken", jinyoung is sneakier in how he executes his fanservice and as you said, he'll always be the one to play along with jackson's dumbassery and give it back as good as he's got.

also all the little cameos of all the other members. long suffering!jaebum is the greatest lol and then this whole segment:

Mark mouths, Gay. Chicken.

"What?" Youngjae, a diligent student of the English language, asks.

"Right," Mark says, finally tearing his gaze away from Jackson's. "Youngjae, repeat after me: Jackson is a dumbass."i also really enjoyed your mark! i feel like a lot of people have pidgeonholed him as this tall/ ( ... )

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:22:41 UTC
omg u qt this is such a nice comment >u< thanks for reading and commenting!!!!

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:23:09 UTC
thank you haha the first thing that stuck out to me about jinson was their gay chicken, so I knew I had to explore it somehow!

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