right wrist, left ankle, heart [2/2] [for yummyda]

[hot7]

Comments

[akmongs]

this fic was amazing, one of my favorites in the exchange so far.
i absolutely love your writing style, the band!au and every single one of your characterizations, especially jaebum's - he's introspective and flawed and, idk, real. you're very detailed and the story has such a nice flow ;;
thank you for participating!

[hipployta]

Awww...Jaebum not understanding and feeling angry until he realizes something isn't right...and an honest conversation ensues

Nice

[yummyda]

oh my god im so happy this is so beautiful i read it on the bus before work and it was exactly what i needed to get me through the day thank you so much
i teared up so many times reading this i had to stop for a moment when jb put the ring on marks finger and again when they were eating food after the hospital visit honestly i adored that so much
i loved that you used music to describe the way jb was feeling that was so so good
also! the end! on the stage and just oh my god it was so good so amazing thank you so much

[nekokonneko]

I really like your writing style and the way you wrote Jaebum; describing his emotional state with musical terms was a really nice touch. I also liked how you integrated real life stuff into the story, like Big Byung and that iconic markbum moment from real got7.

[bloodyrose2442]

i absolutely loved this fic! even though it's one of the longer entries it was such an effortless read and it flowed so easily. i felt as if i had barely begun reading even when the end of the story was near (i sort of really dig this universe now and can think of a hundred different stories mentioned throughout the fic happening in detail- like i love this whole part of an wonderful and expandable au feel it gives even through such small glimpses