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wangbaozi January 15 2015, 09:15:41 UTC
I'm so satisfied reading this because the characterisations are so on point (except for jinyoungs cooking skills bc he himself knows he can't cook for shit)

LIKE THE MARKSON BROSHIP WAS PERF AND ofc I'm going to focus on jackson just for a bit bc hE sprayed Mark in the face like a disobeying puppy and then Jaebum completely taking the reigns at Mark's doctors appointment even though he was basically given them

This was such a great read <3

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hyukbins January 19 2015, 02:17:35 UTC
i really like band aus and this one was great ((and mark/jb!!! yes!!!)) the mentions of big byung and yugbam being them were a nice addition

i also really like you writing style, the portray of jaebum's feeling were so real and the flow was perfect

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jiwoons January 21 2015, 19:56:40 UTC
its actually 4am right now and im pretty incoherent but im leaving a comment anyway because this is really good! itS JB X MARK UFHGUGHUGHUDD SCREAMS but yeah okay i shall start!

i love how this is so realistic? like idk jaebum being jaebum and mark worrying for nothing and jackson and omg yugyeom and bambam, i mean the banter is perfectly got7 even youngjae.... i cry at the accuracy ;; and i love how you related drumming to anger and idk it just summarized jaebum into one and i guess this fic got me reflecting a little because it is that amazing. i love how honest they are with each other and ugh the ring scene and just jb x mark in general. this fic is gold and band!au is gold and markbum is gold basically you are gold and im sure this comment is shitty but great job!!!! <3

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preorder January 21 2015, 22:01:23 UTC
omg ok I'm soooo sorry this comment is so late after this was even posted but... like... why was this so good?! LMAO it's been like, what, two weeks and there are still bits to this that I'm discovering on a second (ok more like fourth) read-through >__tbh I'm not a huge fan of markbum (or maybe more accurately I don't really notice them?) but you've spun their relationship sooo believably here - both the dynamic (hyungline ;_;) and the progression. mark often gets mischaracterized in fic as this secretly ott person or as this totally silent weirdo but you've struck such a good balance here lmao I'm so like *mouth open in shock* I LIKE YOUR MARK SO MUCH!! HE MAKES SO MUCH SENSE?? your characterization in general, like jb is sooo good. he's also a hard voice to get but you've really nailed him. even the opening scene - taking the split second to make sure mark's okay first before yelling at him LMAO, your on-point humor in general tempered by moments of maturity/clarity - I like that this fic is both about markbum and mark and jb ( ... )

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_firstclassmail January 23 2015, 08:07:31 UTC
is anything i wanna say even worth saying after lj user preorder's comment....... that b*tch....... mte......... srsly mte.

i do wanna talk about this super real life jb though b/c um... ridiculous??? he's so used to being right and self-aware that he's completely oblivious omg. also that paragraph where jb is viciously cutting the meat and mark is a wall, IS THIS NOT REAL LIFE. oh yeah plus i screamed at jackson's "yeah, but. come on. how were we supposed to know" OH MY GOD LIKE...... DID THAT NOT PROBABLY TOTALLY HAPPEN... LIKE... IT PROBABLY HAPPENED FOR A PROMOTIONS WHEN JR GOT TOO CAUGHT UP IN PLAYING W JACKSON AND ENDED UP BREAKING HIS FINGERS.....

anyway this is fucking great mte to preorder's comment wow amazing a+

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