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hyukbins January 8 2015, 00:09:30 UTC
ohmygod ohmygod holy f hell, i felt like it started sad and it only went downhill from there and just when i reached the end of the first part i just ???? felt like stuff would get bad and terrible but even if that happened, the whole premise of it, jaebum's discoveries, everything he would sacrifice for jinyoung made it even more painful lmao >_ ( ... )

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reddaylight February 11 2015, 20:05:07 UTC
Thank you for reading and for the lovely comment ^^

Yeah, um... I didn't originally intend to write a sad fic, it just... turned out that way when I was about one-third through. And by that time I just thought... welp, might as well follow through on it. Umm. Yes.

OMG if/when you write a physics and math fic please link me to it, I would love to read it *_*

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hipployta January 9 2015, 03:14:31 UTC
Aww...Jaebum doing what he has to to save Jinyoung any way he can...my JJP boys...and that confirmation that Jinyoung is out there...wonderful

Also all of the cast is glorious

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reddaylight February 11 2015, 20:07:04 UTC
Jaebum here is one of my most favorite characters in all my fics, I would love to write him again along with the rest of the cast.

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

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shrdmdnssftw January 12 2015, 13:04:23 UTC
Jesus. I really don't know what to say. I'm kind of still reeling after reading this fic but I want you to know that it struck me so hard and hit so deep.

I think, more than anything, I like how you portrayed love in this fic. Love, and caring for others, in small and in big ways. Love between friends, between lovers, between families, coworkers, acquaintances. I love that you used science to break down and rebuild religion, that you tied religion with the science. I love that this seems so real and tangible. I love that I could follow some of the science in it, that you made even the most complex physics theories in this understandable as well. I almost hate how well I could slip into this fic because the way it felt so real tore me apart.

This was wonderful, more than I could ever express in words. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece (and kudos to the prompter for sparking such a magnificent idea).

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reddaylight February 11 2015, 20:18:04 UTC
Thank you for the wonderful comment! ^^

My recipient's prompts were wonderful, and two of them gelled together nicely which is what inspired this fic. And your comment makes me smile from ear to ear and thank you so much for reading my fic. I'm glad that you enjoyed it ^^

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anonymous January 16 2015, 11:13:06 UTC
I read this more than a week ago and since then I have been trying to think of a coherent comment worthy of what this fic made me feel but it seems like that is not going to be possible ever lol so here goes.

There are so many scenes that I haven't been able to get out of my head and sometimes throughout the day I would remember them and feel the ache all over again. Jaebum just knowing to find Jinyoung on the hill, his confession, the dinner when Mark found out and this There are only two people who know Jinyoung enough to host him in their shell. But it looks like only one of them can give everything up for him after all, this particular scene and the exchange between Mark and Jaebum at the restaurant really hurt. Jaebum's desperation was so clear and it made everything that happened after even worse ( ... )

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reddaylight February 11 2015, 20:33:02 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful comment omg *_*

The ending was one of the hardest parts for me to write, but in the back of my head I guess I've always sort of known that this was where the story was leading to. And there are so many more things I felt thanks to your comment but I'm also quite lost for words but please know that your comment brightens my day every time I read it. Thank you!!! ^^

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anonymous January 21 2015, 09:23:12 UTC
this is by far the geeatest fanfiction i have ever read. i am seriously amazed. i don't think i should say anything again because i have no words and this story is indescribably amazing- the science explanation thingy intrigued me (which is sort of surprising bc i'm so not good at science.) i like the way you wrote this! are you perhaps a physicist? LOL keep up the good work!

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reddaylight February 11 2015, 20:37:32 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed my fic ^^

Writing the science bits was challenging and rewarding tbh~ I'm actually... from... a business background... so there was a lot of research for this fic. (I've got notes scattered all over my room ahaha-)

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