I... don't know where exactly should I start but feel free to skip the live commentary I put somewhere in here.
Jaebum closes his hand around Jinyoung's. "Like this. You touch something, and you learn what's important." i love how ~calm~ the entire confession went. i love how jinyoung knew jaebum was going to withdraw into himself (or maybe jinyoung also needed something to hold onto to prevent himself from breaking idk).
There are only two people who know Jinyoung enough to host him in their shell. But it looks like only one of them can give everything up for him after all. this. this line got me. i had to stop for a minute before continuing. i feel like this line just pulled every feeling of jaebum (for jinyoung) out and laid it on the table for everyone to see. it was all i (as a reader) had to know about his character and it really summarizes all he is in this fic.
Wherever Jinyoung goes, Jaebum will find him and bring him home.nO
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Jaebum's confession scene was such a challenge to write, there are maybe five ways that scene could have gone in my notes. The one I used here is my favorite, and I'm glad that you like it ^^
Psychology is my first choice too! Like, in university! And I was close to writing this fic purely as psychology fiction, but I figured that physics is also a nice field to play around in. But all in all, thank you for reading my fic, I'm happy that you enjoyed it ^^
The science with a side of maybe religion sort of reminds me of the Wrinkle in Time series, and honestly, I would read an entire novel about this. I'm dying to know if you just made the science up or if it's real, or a mix of both. I want to write a coherent comment because this was so beautifully written, and it's going to stick with me for days, but I'm at a loss. It was just so good, and so real, and I just have no words. I was sad all the way through, but I was holding it together okay until the part about someone "hosting" Jinyoung "in their shell". I was seriously expecting Jaebum to try to put Jinyoung's mind in his body, and the end is sort of open so maybe he's still considering that? This comment is so rambling so I should stop now, but this feels like something I could keep talking about forever. It's one of those really amazing pieces of writing that just sticks with you and really makes you think about things. (And I'm so serious- this would make an amazing novel or something.)
Oooh, Wrinkle in Time... I only read the first(?) book back in high school but I remember loving it~ And thanks for the rambly comment, I love reading them so thank you for taking the time to write it ^^
ok i read this a couple o days ago but i wasnt in a state to leave comments but im free now!!!!! and bc this was so well-written im gonna dedicate a few minutes just to give u a lil thank u note for writing such a perf lil fic :-(((((
i admittedly blanked out a lil during all the hypersystem allusions but nonetheless WOW it's a freakin wealth of info in this fic but it's all weaved in so nicely it's not extraneous at all....... you must be really smart omg i cant imagine having to link present data to future but you did it in such a beautiful way.. i loved the way you described all the characters' thought processes, it made it personal & universal all at once - like, i could both sympathize for and empathize with the character and i love when stories make me feel that way :-( you really have a flair for writing!!!! just.. thank you for writing this 20k beauty i will undoubtedly be returning here whenever the got7 ficdom goes thru a dry spell lol
This is the 4th time (i think?) I've read this fic. I love it so much, omgggggggggg. Eventhough I read it a few times I'm getting emotional every time.. oh damn it i can't even write correctly since i'm tearing up (again)!
This is my favorite fic from far.
To thank you so much for writting such beautiful things, I've decided to make an opv.. I'm not sure it's very good, but.. hope you like it! Love from one of your French fan. ~
So I found out about this fic while browsing through 8tracks. Someone created a playlist inspired by this fic, which I thought fit pretty well. You can find it here if you're interested: http://8tracks.com/sphinxxes/hypersystemBut anyway, I cried so much after reading this fic, nearly sobbed (and then had to go blow my nose from all the snot). I don't think I've ever cried from a fic tbh. I gotta admit I skimmed over some of the science-y stuff cus I (a non-sciency person) wasn't really getting it. But this was written so well
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Jaebum closes his hand around Jinyoung's. "Like this. You touch something, and you learn what's important."
i love how ~calm~ the entire confession went. i love how jinyoung knew jaebum was going to withdraw into himself (or maybe jinyoung also needed something to hold onto to prevent himself from breaking idk).
There are only two people who know Jinyoung enough to host him in their shell. But it looks like only one of them can give everything up for him after all.
this. this line got me. i had to stop for a minute before continuing. i feel like this line just pulled every feeling of jaebum (for jinyoung) out and laid it on the table for everyone to see. it was all i (as a reader) had to know about his character and it really summarizes all he is in this fic.
Wherever Jinyoung goes, Jaebum will find him and bring him home.nO ( ... )
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Jaebum's confession scene was such a challenge to write, there are maybe five ways that scene could have gone in my notes. The one I used here is my favorite, and I'm glad that you like it ^^
Psychology is my first choice too! Like, in university! And I was close to writing this fic purely as psychology fiction, but I figured that physics is also a nice field to play around in. But all in all, thank you for reading my fic, I'm happy that you enjoyed it ^^
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i admittedly blanked out a lil during all the hypersystem allusions but nonetheless WOW it's a freakin wealth of info in this fic but it's all weaved in so nicely it's not extraneous at all....... you must be really smart omg i cant imagine having to link present data to future but you did it in such a beautiful way.. i loved the way you described all the characters' thought processes, it made it personal & universal all at once - like, i could both sympathize for and empathize with the character and i love when stories make me feel that way :-( you really have a flair for writing!!!! just.. thank you for writing this 20k beauty i will undoubtedly be returning here whenever the got7 ficdom goes thru a dry spell lol
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God.
This is the 4th time (i think?) I've read this fic. I love it so much, omgggggggggg. Eventhough I read it a few times I'm getting emotional every time.. oh damn it i can't even write correctly since i'm tearing up (again)!
This is my favorite fic from far.
To thank you so much for writting such beautiful things, I've decided to make an opv.. I'm not sure it's very good, but.. hope you like it! Love from one of your French fan. ~
https://youtu.be/DcWE0N5bdvU
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