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Jul 11, 2007 23:29

Title: Every Little Thing
Author: elaborationlove
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Neville/Luna
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Summary: Neville and Luna, sittin' in a tree.
Author's Notes: My first N/L fic. I was inspired by the film, however, there are no spoilers.
Beta Credit: None.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Word Count: 724

( Every little thing she does it magic. )

Comments 4

coervus July 12 2007, 04:42:08 UTC

Yes. I was feeling the Neville/Luna in the movie. I loved when they each grabbed the other's hand to pull away from danger.

This fic is sweet. I normally don't like "first kiss" fics, but it's these two, and they are definitely an exception. The last line is lovely!

elaborationlove July 12 2007, 16:47:12 UTC

I know. The best hand-grab was Neville getting Luna because he was all the way in the back of the group and ran a pretty darn long way to get her. And thank you--I hadn't even planned on that line until I had gotten to it and it just seemed so perfect. Thanks for reviewing!

mosaic July 13 2007, 06:01:48 UTC

This is super cute! I love these two, and I loved their moments in the movie. Thanks so much for sharing!

elaborationlove July 13 2007, 16:04:57 UTC

:) Thank you!