FIC: The Touch of Your Hand

[mosaic]

Title: The Touch of Your Hand
Author: mosaic
Prompt: Apple - The apple tree represents youth, beauty, and love. It features in most major myths as the fruit that keeps the gods young/immortal. Its juice can be used to infer strength and beauty. It is commonly used for spells regarding love and healing.
Rating: PG
Warning: DH-compliant (except for the

Comments

[jennydoom86]

Bahhh! That was so brilliant! I am a big Neville/Luna shipper and you did a great job with the characterizations of both of them! I love how you had Neville keep his hair long kind of as a 'reminder' of what he went through during the war...Love it!

*shakes head sadly* J.K.! Neville and Luna would have completed the circle of the sextuplet! We've got Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione but no Neville/Luna! *sighs*

Oh well, that is what fan fiction is for and you've got it down! =D

Great job!

[mosaic]

My understanding was that that was one of the main reason JKR kept them apart - she said it would be "too neat" to have all the sextet paired up. But I agree with you... it makes me sad.

But thank you so much! Long-haired!Neville is now part of my canon. I'm so glad you liked it!!

[rosemerry]

Oh, that was wonderful! Really, really loved it! :)

[mosaic]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it!

[slytherin_face]

You already know my feelings on this fic, but I'll say it again anyway! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! ^.^

[mosaic]

THANKS, LOVE!!!! And thanks for all your help!!

[lionille]

Ah, that was such a lovely and tender scene between them. I liked this vivid description at the beginning:
She could see Neville in the distance, distorted and tinted green from the glass.
And I really loved the idea that Luna was talented in inventing potions because of her mother.
Oh, and the lion and eagle cups were a nice touch. :)

[mosaic]

Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked the little details; sometimes I put them in there and wonder if anyone will notice! Thanks for your lovely comment!

[inperfectpeace]

Gah! What a beautiful fic. ♥ I stumbled onto this from a Luna comm.

Luna/Neville is cannon in my book.

[mosaic]

Which comm, if I may ask?

I'm so thrilled that you liked it! Thanks for your lovely comment. They are canon to me, too.

P.S. I love your icon.

[inperfectpeace]

loonynews. Are there more Luna comms? *would really like to know where she can find more Luna fics* :)

Thanks for the icon love. Neville is made of win.

[mosaic]

Well, I know of three Neville/Luna comms, but I'm not sure about strictly Luna comms. I didn't know that looneynews existed, though, so I was curious where my fic was being put, since I didn't post it to any strictly Luna comms. XD