Is there anything I should work on? Personality? Grammar? Etc?

Please state them here, but please no flaming! Constructive criticism, please.

Name/Nick; Lassie
LJ name: lachry_mose
Other characters currently played [ name :: series :: lj username]: Azmaria Hendric // Chrono Crusade // pracao
E-mail: justincriedariver@gmail.com
AIM/messenger: Justin cried
Fourth Wall? Sure~

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