Fic: Off the Stage (4/14)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Off the Stage (4/14)

Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)

Rating: PG-13 (eventually NC-17)

Characters/Pairings: Van Hansis/Eric Sheffer Stevens

Summary: Future fic. What happens off the stage when Van and Eric meet again?

Warnings: RPS. If you are offended by the idea, please do not read this story.

Disclaimer: Complete fabrication, never happened, never

Comments

[sripley]

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[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. ~Ali

[comasisters]

awwww it's just insane how much I love your updates and how brilliant you are telling this story.
The tension is so palpable but so sweet at the same time, never over the top, beautifully written.

Thank you again, I feel that you've been kind of afraid to share it and I'm grateful you did, hope you definitely feel the support now!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. And yes, the story was written based upon convos. with Cherimola. Basically it was written for her and maybe me. I was encouraged to share it, but because of the subject matter I didn't want to. But the support has been so kind and welcoming that I will continue to post. Thank you for such a lovely comment. ~Ali

[aljc100]

This is really getting good - thoroughly intrigued to see how it plays out. And delighted that you are continuing to post - I know RPS isn't for everyone, but I am willing to suspend my disbelief! More than willing. I am particularly enjoying the ATWT flashback sections - these work so well in parallel with the real time/play stuff - great job!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy the play and the flashbacks. I do appreciate you suspending your disbelief as well. ~Ali

[snowmore]

Ali,
This is quite a special story! It is wonderful to read about their friendship and appreciation of each other's talent.

In someone else's hands, I may have been quite uncomfortable reading a story about Van and Reid, but your story is speaking to me. That is very special. :)
Robin

[gradgirl_07]

Robin,

Thank you. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the story. I know the topic isn't universally loved, so I appreciate you taking a chance.

~Ali

[snapegirlusa]

I love seeing Eric getting jealous over Van and Mia bonding. I have a feeling Mia is going to get hurt in the end though. :(

I thought it was great the way Van said his lines out to Eric in the audience. I felt a bond between them that was so tangible you could almost see it!

"Yes," he finally murmured. Instead of saying: It felt so odd to kiss someone other than you.
I love that Eric is starting to realize there is something off-kilter about his reactions to Van.

And the flashback was of my favorite scene of the last year: DALLAS!!! Any memory of those Dallas episodes is great in my book. Their acting was off the charts those days. And with such great material to work with. <3

Bring on Chapter 5!!

[gradgirl_07]

Glad you liked jealous!Eric. Mia has a plan for Van and we'll see it in the future. Eric is definitely starting to figure some things out. Dallas was one of my favorite scenes and there was some other great moments I hope you enjoy as well. Thank you. ~Ali