Fic: Off the Stage (4/14)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Off the Stage (4/14)

Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)

Rating: PG-13 (eventually NC-17)

Characters/Pairings: Van Hansis/Eric Sheffer Stevens

Summary: Future fic. What happens off the stage when Van and Eric meet again?

Warnings: RPS. If you are offended by the idea, please do not read this story.

Disclaimer: Complete fabrication, never happened, never

Comments

[nanaloralee]

Another great chapter. I am really enjoying the flashbacks to the Luke and reid rehearsals. I can't wait to read more.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the flashbacks. ~Ali

[joann414]

I loved the rehearsing of Luke and Reid's kissing scene. It was great. The scene with the girl and Van capturing Eric's attention was great. Loved it.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! The flashbacks will continue with some of the rehearsals/taping. And I'm glad you liked the scene with Van and Mia and Eric. Thank you for reading. ~Ali

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I don't think they'll be able to hide that chemistry. I'm glad you're enjoying the play as well. The next chapter will be posted on Wednesday. ~Ali

[bluemagicrose]

I can't even begin to describe how much I love the rehearsal part of their first kiss as Luke and Reid. Like, stupidly big smile on my face love. :) I like the little detail of Eric doing it a bit too hard so that their teeth hit during the kiss. And that Van liked that Eric held his head after the kiss, adding to Reid's excitement (I personally love that little part more than the kiss). I'm kinda giddy right now over that.

Is it wrong that I like Mia and Van's chemistry? Cause I do. Although I can see Mia starting to like Van as more than a castmate and Van having to gently turn her down. I find it interesting that Eric hasn't...not been jealous, but that he's just a bystander right now. He's just watching Van and Mia and seeing where they are, without having a reaction. I guess that's going to change, but I like it.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. It was lovely to go back and revisit some of the great Luke/Reid moments. And my fav. part was Reid holding Luke's face as well. I don't think it's wrong to like the chemistry between Van and Mia. I like the relationship they develop. We'll see more insights into Eric's feelings and for now I think he is a bit of a bystander but we'll get glimpses of his feelings as the story progresses.

Thank you again for reading! ~Ali

P.S. I missed Community this week, even a rerun, so I esp. love the continued use of icons.

[murgy31]

I loved it! Your language is absolutely brilliant. I love the phrase gentle chemistry.... It is a brillaint story!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the phrase gentle chemistry. ~Ali