Okay, fellow grammarians, I've encountered a question and can't seem to find the right answer. Can anybody lead me in the right direction
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I'd go with the plural. Not only would it read more naturally, it's more likely to reflect the situation (it is more likely from a casual reading of the sentence that multiple suggestions were in use, rather than just the one).
While I thank you for your help, I don't think I can use that. I have already made several corrections to errors in the sentence and the instructions are for light copyediting. So I think that would be considered too much rewriting. Level editing is part of the course instruction.
Plus, I'm still curious about the correct verb to use, if a sentence is written such that revising the conundrum away isn't possible.
I'm inclined to agree with the first commenter: the subject of the sentence is "suggestions" so the verb is plural. That's a dramatic simplification, but it seems to work.
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As you wouldn't say "suggestions was used", but would say "suggestions were used", that's the way you should go.
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I'd go with the plural. Not only would it read more naturally, it's more likely to reflect the situation (it is more likely from a casual reading of the sentence that multiple suggestions were in use, rather than just the one).
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Sentence length cut by 29%
Passive voice eliminated
Plural/singular quandary sidestepped
"Week six agenda" awkwardness rectified
"Anywhere from (…) to" redundancy nuked
"One to ten" stiltedness zapped
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Plus, I'm still curious about the correct verb to use, if a sentence is written such that revising the conundrum away isn't possible.
I'm inclined to agree with the first commenter: the subject of the sentence is "suggestions" so the verb is plural. That's a dramatic simplification, but it seems to work.
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