Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL)

Apr 05, 2010 21:12

It had taken the whole night, but when Jin came to school the next day, he was sure that what he felt towards Kazuya was bare disgust.

Probably even hate.

He hadn’t slept at all and usually, after nights like the one he had gone through, Jin wouldn’t even think about going to school. Instead, he would sleep long, catch up on all the sleep he had ( Read more... )

multichap: seven days, akame

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slayer_kur April 5 2010, 22:16:18 UTC
*cries*
If this is the best way to end a relation like this, why does it feel so wrong to meeee??? *cries more*
I mean, my heart is completly broken, and even if I know this is how things must end, I cannot accept it!

So, im not breathing 'till you update! *puppy eyes*

Thank you so much for this story!!!! I enyojed it very very very much, it was full of love, feelings and magic.
Love you for this ^^

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yumiko_okahawa April 5 2010, 22:25:36 UTC
*dries your tears and gives you tissues*
That's only feeling wrong because they are still in love~~

Just, please, start breathing again? is it enough if I told you there's been a sequel planned to this every since I typed out Wednesday? So, there's going to be a sequel for sure! Please, breathe again!!

Thanks so much for the very kind words. i am more than happy you enjoyed this. Thanks so very much ♥

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tieuthantien April 5 2010, 22:21:06 UTC
I'm psychic ... I've read your mind. I really did thing all Kazuya did last chapter was because he had to move away ....
The ending was unexpected thou, I've never read an incomplete ending Akame fic before, most of the time, if it a unhappy ending one, that would be because of the characters' death, but the both of them are still alive and going. Surprisingly enough, I like it like this, an open end that leave me ponder on what would happen ..
Thanks for the fic, this is so gonna be in my favorite list.

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 17:29:33 UTC
Yeah, you saw it coming ^^ That he had to move, in any case, really was a huge factor for Kazuya to make that decision.

It#s mostly like that, isn't it? If their not together, then only because one of them died. I wouldn't ever be able to kill one of them, so I somehow figures, i had to do it like this~

Thanks a lot for saying this was on your faves list! i am very happy you enjoyed it that much :)
Thanks!

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pinkeuphoria1 April 5 2010, 22:23:44 UTC
I don't think I've left a comment before even if I did read this from the beginning but I was supposed to be on hiatus and stay away from lj but uhh fail lol BUT you are great ♥ I absolutely loved the fic from the first chapter up till now. And even if it didn't have the 'happily ever after', I absolutely went ksdbvjrevbrt since it felt more realistic this way... and it's still a pretty open ending and dkvbre .... I'd say more but I'm too incoherent atm XDDD Conclusion: lovelovelovelovelove this ♥

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 17:51:45 UTC
:D
Thanks a lot for deciding to leave a comment! ^^ I am happy yoe enjoyed the whole thing! also, i am glad you're satisfied with the ending~ I struggled alot, thinking over again and again if i should really post this... v.v
The ending is open, yes... open for continuation :)

Thanks so very much, I am very happy :) <3

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kawaiikame April 5 2010, 22:24:40 UTC
wow I never expected such a angsty end, from the part when Jin come to visit Kame I thought everything going to be alright and even after it but I guess they're specially Kame still young ne? how old is he 16? still too young and insucre to fall in love and what with a boy? it's quite difficult and I do understand his reason.

Though my fangirl mind still wanted to read them being together at the end <3 so I reallly wish that you'll make an Epilogue? ♥

Anyway I'm gonna miss this fic and I do hope that you'll start new one soon :D

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 17:58:37 UTC
Well, actually, i had it planned ever since Wednesday was typed out. In some part of my mind I always thought that probably while writing i would find the missing twist to turn this into a happy ending and for a moment I even considered letting kazuya follow Jin, hold him back and I had scenes in my head forming about Jin staying that night- just staying by Kazuya's side. But in the end, even in that imagination, Jin left the next morning, with them agreeing on parting.
So, there wouldn't ahve been a difference... not a huge one, at least.

It's just so true.. they are both that young, kazuya just 16... you need a lot of courage in that age to admit you have a boyfriend.

I want them to be together in the end, too. The seven days ended here, I decided that I would stick to the original concept of seven days.
That doesn't mean those two won't ahve another chance on happiness with each other~
I can't let them stay like this for forever, anyways.

Thanks so much for reading until the end! I am very happy you liked it! <3

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 18:00:55 UTC
I am sorry!

Maybe someday... I am sure that day will come and I will make sure to let you all know if by then, they're going to be stronger <3

Thank you so very much for reading until the end and always leaving lovely comments!
Thanks ~~~~ <3

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