Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL)

Apr 05, 2010 21:12

It had taken the whole night, but when Jin came to school the next day, he was sure that what he felt towards Kazuya was bare disgust.

Probably even hate.

He hadn’t slept at all and usually, after nights like the one he had gone through, Jin wouldn’t even think about going to school. Instead, he would sleep long, catch up on all the sleep he had ( Read more... )

multichap: seven days, akame

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yumenokoe April 5 2010, 22:51:00 UTC
now I'm cring.... T.T
seriously, I always hate it, when I see people separate, especially when they actually could have been together if they had puta bit more efforts into it... Just like in some cheesy movie, I see the flashback of their time spent together and seeing it is all gone makes me cry... Maybe it is because I know that feeling, of being realy close to that happyness, and still not being able to reach it, ending up loosing everything that was before...
Actually I would have wanted to see them together in the end, because this story has just too many common points with my own... I hoped they'd have a different ending though...
Nee... their problem was their age and the circumstances... if they met again 10 years from now, would it be different? would they be together? if I used my big teary puppy eyes, would you consider writing it? *hopeful* :'(
*whipes tears off*
thanks for sharing! it was a beautiful ending even though I wished it had been happier ^^ *hug*

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 18:17:52 UTC
;_; I am very sotrry to make you *hands you tissues*

This just IS like a cheesy movie *smile* They couldn't hold on to each other at this point... They are too young and especially Kazuya... he's just 16, you need to have so much courage to admit having a boyfriend at that age. He lacks that courage and I can understand that... It's still unfortunate they had to let go of the happiness that was so close because of that v.v

Don't let them wait for ten years, i actually planned to let them meet after about 2 or 3 years again ;)

*dries your tears*
Thanks for always taking your time to read! I am very happy you read until the end of this multichap~ it's definitely not the end of those two ♥

Thank you!

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 20:58:20 UTC
I am sorry about that T___T

I wanted it to be a happy ending, as well, but i just couldn't pull one... But, the seven days are over with this, I wanted to end this after those, but that doesn't mean those two won't get another chance :)

Thanks so much for the lovely words, for reading until the end and for always, always commenting on my updates :)

Thank you so very much! <33

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diisa_pinky April 5 2010, 22:58:10 UTC
you make me cry... T^T
it's true that they were young and not mature, and they inexperienced
but i hope they will meet each other again...
you wrote it xDDD

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 21:03:53 UTC
I am very sorry to make you ;_; They just aren't ready yet... But right, I wrote it. Someday, they'll be ready and then they'll meet again and figure out what they really want :)

Thanks a lot for reading~ <333

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garnet_light April 5 2010, 23:01:47 UTC
I love it as always sweetie~~
I definitely agree with you on this
Their age and Kazuya's anxiousness is a huge line standing between them
But I loved the ending and I believe that it has a great significant that Kazuya is the one who is going to work harder this time to make things work because Jin worked his share before~~
Thanks a lot for this awesome and wonderful update!! *hugs tight*
Congrats on finishing this AMAZING fic!! I will definitely miss it though!!
Chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 21:11:39 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely words~ I am very happy you liked the whole fanfiction. They really are too immature at the moment, especially Kazuya, but... well, gives them some time, I am sure a few years later they will do better ;) I'll make sure to let you know when that time comes <3

Thank you so very much for staying with me until the end and always leaving me loveyl comments *hugs*
Thanks so very much, I am very happy you enjoyed this ♥

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sanamasala April 5 2010, 23:16:32 UTC
Oh no!!!! i didn't want it to be a sad end!!! T__T

But anyway , this fic was awesome really!!!! the theme was really good , i felt crazy when i talked about your fic to one of my friend "oh my good it's friday only 3 days left!!!!" xDDDDDDD

Thanks a lot!!! hope to read another fic ^^

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yumiko_okahawa April 6 2010, 21:15:33 UTC
I am sorry! I didn't want it, either ;___;

I am happy you were so much into the story that you even talked to your friend about it ^___^ Thanks so very much!

I'll surely come up with some other fic soon again! Thank you so very much for reading this until the end :)
Thank you!

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