Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL)

Apr 05, 2010 21:12

It had taken the whole night, but when Jin came to school the next day, he was sure that what he felt towards Kazuya was bare disgust.

Probably even hate.

He hadn’t slept at all and usually, after nights like the one he had gone through, Jin wouldn’t even think about going to school. Instead, he would sleep long, catch up on all the sleep he had ( Read more... )

multichap: seven days, akame

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akameangel April 6 2010, 00:05:33 UTC
I was sad because theydon't have a happy ending. But after reading your comments about one shot sequel of them meeting again, my mood immediately brighten. They still have possible future. I really love this fic. Thanks a lot for sharing. <333333333

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 18:47:08 UTC
Haha, well... this had to end like this. The seven days are over and there's just nothing I could have grasped to amke them stay together. But this doesn't mean the end of their story, just of this ^^

Thanks so very much for reading and always taking your time. I am very happy you enjoyed this! Thank you! <33

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is_kazuchan April 6 2010, 00:19:34 UTC
T__T no other way? i wish they together... epilogue mayb.. ;)

nway beautiful story..

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 18:52:56 UTC
No other way for this, the seven days are over and with that, the multichap is. But, as I said... I am going to make sure those two will find their happy ending after all :) In another story, for sure!

Thanks so much for reading along, I am very happy if you enjoyed this!
Thank you!

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6summer_rain9 April 6 2010, 00:25:12 UTC
Girl, you did it.
I almost cried.:P
This story is awesome and so well written that I kind of feel the need to rob you of your talent.
Despite the sadness of this ending, I agree with your decision.
It feels natural and real.
They shared a game, but all the things they experienced happened too fast.
It's normal that they were, that Kame was, scared about it.
They're still young and, like you said, have all the time in the world to live a REAL love story and understand better what does it mean to stay with someone.
Nice plot, very sweet and touching.
Well used words and good grammar, which make the reading even more enoyable.
I loved how you described the characters, I was able to understand them better.
Plus, I appreciated your 'loyalty' to reality.They are BOYS, they couldn't have had a peaceful life at school being romantically involved with each other.:3

LOVELY.♥♥♥
Thank you so much.

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 18:57:57 UTC
Oh, wow, thanks for those very kind words!
Haha, I am not that talented, there are so many other really good writers out there in the fandom :) But thanks a lot for the lovely compliment, I am very happy ^^

True, indeed... they need some more time. This was some kind of love and I am still sure they were both honest and sincere about it, but it happened too fast and the circumstances were just wrong. They need a lot of courage to admit to a boyfriend in public at that age, and well... at least, Kazuya doesn't ahve that courage at the moment and I think that is just natural.

Oh, I am very happy you praised my grammar... I passed the exam for English grammar, actually, but not with flying colours... I felt a little insecure about writing because of that~~ v.v

Thank you so, so very much for the kind words and for reading until the end! I am very happy you enjoyed this and liked how it ended. The seven days are over, but they will get another chance in another story of mine~~

Thank you!! ♥♥♥♥

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dungbrains April 6 2010, 00:26:04 UTC
SADIST.

HOW LONG UNTIL A ONE-SHOT/EPILOGUE/DRABBLE?!

;____; how could you. On a day like that.

I love this fic so much. Seriously Seven days is like my favourite manga and with akame it's just perfect.
That can't end like that. I can't wait ;____;

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 19:00:22 UTC
Oh, i am so very sorry, please don't be mad >_< It'll surely take some time, but it will pop up and then things between them will work out, I am sure!!

Thank you for reading until the end, though, I hope you could enjoy it at least a bit!
*gives you tissues and cookies*
It's just the end for the seven days, they'll have another chance.... Okay?
<33

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mizzue_3 April 6 2010, 00:34:26 UTC
poor jin...

i dont really get kame's decision but this fic is really cool.

im a litle sad that its already over..

thanks for sharing =)

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 19:02:55 UTC
Poor them... well, kame's just 16 in this... it needs so much courage to admit being in love with a boy at that age and then, well, show it in public. Kazuya doesn't ahve that courage. Combined with his natural fear, he just couldn't decide for Jin.
But they will get another chance on this, I'll make sure to let you know if the years apart will have made them stronger then :)

Thank you so very much for reading until the end; I am happy if you could enjoy it! <3

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