The Time Has Come (ch.2)

[greeneyes0911]

Title:The Time Has Come

Comments

[iskavii]

oh dear! Hatter's quite good at putting the cart before the horse isn't he? the whole kids discussion before he even pops the question. And Alice is still working though her insecurity issues. I have to say that I love Savy though, she should be able to keep them from over thinking things to death, at least in regards to each other. Looking forward to more.

[greeneyes0911]

Thanks love! lol Savy is actually one of the leads from one of my own books, I do adore her. Course she's a bit softer her, in my book she's hardcore ex-pirate like. Curses like a sailor, drinks like a fish, and smokes like a freight train...course she's also quite older. So I guess a younger Savy would be softer.

[iskavii]

Funnily enough, one of the characters in my story is named Tavy and my main character is named Sam. Mush it together and you have Savy...
Mind you Sam would have very little patience with your Savy and Tavy would probably spend most of his time trying to convince her to come bowling with him....

[greeneyes0911]

Haha, well she's Savy here but she's Lenny in my book, or Leonette....but she prefers Lenny. Her mum was a French courtier, and Lenny ran away to become a pirate. And you can't be dread pirate Leonette can you? Especially when women shouldn't be pirates. She's right fun though.

[gretchasketcha]

This is a really amazing story, so far. I keep imagining it like a sequel on SyFy in my mind. Wouldn't that just be awesome??

[greeneyes0911]

Haha, that's really nice, to think my work is good enough to work as the actual sequel to the movie. I'm glad you like it. Another new character will be introduced in the following chapter, and that should be it for the big ones.

[gretchasketcha]

It definitely is! Oh, exciting!

[sweetone41185]

Awesome so far. I'm really loving it. I completely forgot about Duchess going after Alice and Hatter to get their help til she showed up. Got all wrapped up in Alice, Hatter and Savy. Hatter was pretty damn funny, poor guy.

[greeneyes0911]

Lol that was the game plan was to get you distracted. So you were all do-dee-do-do Alice and Hatter and their cute little life with Savy who's a crazy troubled teen. And then boom, there's Duchess. I'm glad you like it!

[rodabug]

I am loving this...please keep it going.

[greeneyes0911]

You'll be pleased to hear I've started the third chapter. Another character will be introduced.

[gretchasketcha]

By the way, you should cut this. It completely clogs up you page haha.

[greeneyes0911]

just did that a bit ago, I didn't know how to so I had to google directions. I'm new to LJ.

[gretchasketcha]

Yeah, I'm new too. I had no idea either until someone asked me to cut a post with tv spoilers haha. Woops!