i quit every game i play

[greysgurl]

Title: i quit every game i play
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Summary: It was a moment out of one of those Meg Ryan movies that she really used to love, where girl and guy meet again  after ten years and they fall in love again. Jesse sees her again in a chance meeting in an audition - what follows are a series of moments documenting the way friendship

Comments

[katherine_lupin]

this is completely awesome!!! I love how you manage to develop things between them and how sweet Jesse seems to be, but still being Jesse, really really loved it!
good work

[greysgurl]

Thankyou! :D I always love reading comments from you! :)

[falulatonks]

Ohh, loved this. My absolute favourite thing about this is how gradual their progress is - not slow to the point of being maddening or unbelievable, though, but a great, perfect pace. Loved the idea of something like pizza tying them together a little bit, really liked the idea of watching these rehearsals and the casting to understand how great they could be together on-stage, everything. I especially loved the last part, when they finally sort of confessed - his tired "God, you talk so much," made me crack up, and I continued grinning all the way till he turned up at her doorstep, twenty minutes later.

Lovely! These two set in the future is one of my favourite things to imagine, so I enjoyed this so, so much.

[greysgurl]

Thankyou so much - I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

[greysgurl]

Thanks!

[pippazx]

I really enjoyed watching the two develop in this! I almost felt bad for the director, and he made me laugh some. I think that it would have been interesting to see more from the other actors, though. Great fic and concluding line! ("So he kept a small velvet box tucked away in his underwear drawer for opening night.") :D

[greysgurl]

Thankyou! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[v_wiggin]

Wonderful. Liked how Rachel still had issues and she didn't magically fall in love with him. I absolutely love this couple.

[greysgurl]

Thanks! :D :D