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greysgurl

til it's over

May 24, 2010 19:51

Title: til it's over
Author: greysgurl
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,200
Summary: In an instant, he saw a glimpse: a glimpse of a future when he’d see her again. Four different possibilities, four different outcomes, four different futures in which he’d lived without her. Jesse wonders when he'll see her again.

( Such a scary place to start.... )

jesse/rachel, fanfic: glee

Comments 6

pippazx May 24 2010, 16:13:16 UTC

This was beautiful and a bit depressing, all at once! I'm not sure I liked the last Rachel much, though. I really liked Jesse working at McKinley, though. I like how you had Jesse just kind of let go and settle for the future that comes, though oddly I was dissapointed that he wasn't selfish and didn't go after Rachel because of his own needs. Good piece and thanks for sharing it! :]

antigoneblack May 24 2010, 17:28:19 UTC

I loved this! It was wonderful to see the future flashing before his eyes.

Loved it.

reality0junkie May 24 2010, 21:12:48 UTC

I love this.
Though I kind of wish, he'd go after her.

anonymous May 25 2010, 09:05:45 UTC

That was really good! Love the stream of thought for Jesse and the timeline of events.

anonymous May 27 2010, 12:23:45 UTC

very nice.
love the subtle RENT reference too.
=]

unseensorrows July 3 2010, 07:23:15 UTC

Awhh. He didn't go after her so her dreams could come true!
That's so heartbreakingly sad. I loved this!
The idea was so unique and perfect! <3