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FIC: Lie Back and Think of England

Jul 07, 2007 18:30

Title: Lie Back and Think of England
Author: Knightmusic
Rating: R
Pairing: Gil/Warrick
Kink(s): master/servant role playing
Challenge: Stump the mod: an "undercover" or some kind of public role-playing scenario. I'd like them to be taken by surprise at the hotness of it.
Summary: A witness at a crime scene gets the wrong impression of Gil and Warrick.
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Comments 10

elmyraemilie July 8 2007, 01:09:14 UTC

I? Am grinning like a complete idiot. This is *so* hot and so well-written, and makes such good use of the Gil-centric POV for the great twist at the end...

::more grinning and fanning of self::

You rock!

knightmusic July 9 2007, 15:41:43 UTC

You know, *I* didn't even know that Warrick was thinking that until he said so. He's a tough nut to crack, that boy.

Thanks, hon!

kelly_girl July 8 2007, 10:04:05 UTC

I loved the growing tension in the fic from Gil's discovery that he liked serving Warrick all the way to the bedroom scene. So many lovely and hot, no scorching, images in this fic.

Great job!

knightmusic July 9 2007, 15:43:30 UTC

You're very kind. Thanks!

mackiedockie July 9 2007, 05:39:15 UTC

Warrick has such hot possibilities as the stern taskmaster...very hard to resist!

knightmusic July 9 2007, 15:44:56 UTC

Oh indeed he does! In my mind, it's no stretch at *all* to see him as the Dom over Gil. In fact, it almost seems to work better with the two of them when the power dynamic falls that way.

Thanks!

syrenslure July 9 2007, 08:08:20 UTC

Oh, lovely. I really love how you take the prompts and turn them around into something I had never thought of, something even better. I feel like I got I present.

I feel the need to write some kinky Grissom fic of my own... any suggestions? (mods need love, too - besides all the better to inspire you with... I want more kinky fic... lol)

knightmusic July 9 2007, 15:48:59 UTC

That's why I prefer people to avoid getting too specific in their prompts. First of all, it's a bit stifling for someone to dictate the fic they want and for me to try and write it, and secondly, I like the chance to look at a challenge and see how I can make it work for me.

I have to say, this one was actually a little difficult. Trying to find a scenario where they'd be involved in public role-playing without bending my own disbelief too far (I don't care for the augmented "cop role" the CSIs have been filling, lately. I like them better when they're being dorky and running experiments). But that's always the line I hold myself to; How wild can I make this, and still have it adhere to the rules of the world canon has set for me. More fun that way, I think.

And you can't have too much kinky Grissom fic. I'll have to think about that for a while, but I'll be back with a list of my bullet-proof kinks for you. ;)

munin July 9 2007, 22:52:45 UTC

You know me, I'm a dom!Gil girl. But this worked for me. Oh boy did it work for me! I am a huge sucker for the "yes sir" "no sir" servant type of dominance. (Gee, is there anyone surprised by that?) I know I definitely think it's woth exploring more. Lucky Warrick!