Done With You fic, part 2
Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay-e, here it goes, to my lovely cohort of friends and dirty-minded conspirators. :) JUST CLICK the cut already AND ENJOY!
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I like him here ten times more than on your SWSS! And I liked him in there too...but I think here you caught MY Krycek. WHAT?????????????????? So you want my Krycek in SWSS go bananas and tie Dean up and..rip his fly open and jerk him off????????????????????????????????? Now,SERIOUSLY, I don't follow the desires of my fans!
You wrote SWSS and I enjoyed the p0rn, you write the kink fic and I enjoy the characterization?!?! Hmmm. Maybe it's the wine I drunk, but I don't follow you. One thing, Done is NOT about porn. It's about Krycek self-establishment, breaking Dean and showing him who's alpha dog, so to say. Teaching Dean WHO is on top. a hidden desire of Krycek learnign more about Dean, but mixed with despise of HOW the guy bears himself towards K.
But OK, you say - PERFECT?????
What do you think Krycek did next? ;)
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That's my point...I KNOW! But I remember I had liked A LOT the sex part of it, more than this one that is born from the sex scene (I assume).
On this one I adored the first part, with Krycek all badass and cold and Dean stubborn until he breaks.
So you want my Krycek in SWSS go bananas and tie Dean up and..rip his fly open and jerk him off????????????????????????????????LOL, NOOO! You misunderstand me badly here! And DON'T DRINK WHILE I DO FB, THIS WAY YOU DON'T FOLLOW MY ALREADY FLAWED AND ILLOGIC MIND ( ... )
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If you ask me, my fav part is when Krycek grabs Dean by the balls... YUM! I can feel it in my hand /coughs, splutters/
Ok, I wanted to write a controversial fic, here I have it. But it was a nice excercise, and certainly tickled me in many places, not only in my brain!
So....you' re contradicing yourself, saying that you prefer K in Done because he shows his colder and sadistic side, BUT I recall in SWSS you melted towards him only when I made him FALL for Dean on the inside...so where's the logics????
Heck, I'm trying to follow my own thought here..
ANYWAY, just tell me what you liked. Umm. Yeah. Maybe I should read it tomorrow with a sober mind. LOL.I re-read it now, and I think I understand what you liked, me showing what Krycek can be when he turns his *bad* side to Dean. Luckily, Dean of SWSS won't feel it on his sexy hide. While in Done unfortunately Dean is too cocky and a bit immature to find the best way approach to Krycek to get out of the fix without freaking Krycek out. If D&K switched places, then I'm sure ( ... )
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Then, again, this is to fulfill my kink, to show Dean's being grabbed by the balls, Krycek bursting with desire he can't allow himself...Krycek trying to keep the cool face on, yet acting against his reason to take Dean off, choosing to better erase his memory than to take him off...iMHO it's pretty in character.
I did use the self-cutting as mere pot device...I never understood the idea behind it. If you ask ME, then no, I don't see Dean as one (Sam, maybe), but it helped to move the plot onwards, and I used it.
So, in one word, you enjoyed it?
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I enjoyed this way more than I should and you've made me very curious? Will Krycek keep Dean or dump him somewhere with no memory of what happened? I bet Mulder would loove to meet Dean*smirks*
So is there going to be a third part? Plz!
Ps. freaking amazing as always Olga, and yet you keep surprising me(in a very good way!)
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And yeah, Im a trickster. I implied that Krycek can get Dean to Mulder, but do you think he would? My wicked idea is that Krycek can brainwash Dean enough to present him to CSM, to make a *perfect soldier* (plus a great lay for a short while, till the new feeling brings thrills to K). I AM of a firm opinion that you can brainwash Dean easy enough to make him belief he's making the mankind some great good working for the Government, plus saving people etc. Plus...he gets PAID for that. Sam...he'd not buy that shit.
COME ON, you should enjoy it to the MAXIMUM!
I' ve had some VERY perverted porny ideas about the 3rd part, but it's too..unreal to see the light.
Seriously, if you DID enjoy it, then my efforts are redeemed. It took several months for this fic to see the light.
Now, I'm looking forward for a new vid!
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Umm ## not sure about this particular storyline (though can see the challenge for you).
Can't quite get my head round Krychek being such a bad-ass to Dean!! not after SWSS (I know it's the plot but hey). Personally I don't see how anyone can resist Dean's hypnotic charms//if they had not been interrupted....
Come on who's fooling whom here.
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Ha ha, you're not the first to mention that it's hard to resist Dean's charms (and I agree oh yeah oh yeah), but IMHO if someone *could* resist some, it's Krycek. That's the fun of it.
And then...some of my pals demanded kink and powerplay...and here, I delivered. Was a tough challenge though.
I have a few plot bunnies and drabbles started that will deal with both parties...finding some satisfaction in each other's company.
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/grins/
Seriously, you got my idea right from the 1st line to the last. The idea of Dean self-cutting does not sit with me well at all (it's more what I can see Sam doing, but when he is a teen, not the Sam of season two or three), it's a one time shot to tie the story in nicely. But if you asked me if he could've experimented with sexually, why not? We all have a darker streak we have tried to experiment maybe once (or did not try at all because we've not met the right person to try it with). I see Dean is same type of a guy.
You perfect you! I think we can live with the typos. :) Enjoy it on a cold winter evening.
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