APH: For the Lovely Miss Rena

[grosse_averse]

Title: Change Your Mind
Author: grosse_averse
Rating: R for sexy feet times eventually ending in actual sexy times.
Characters: France, Canada
Warnings: Badly written, spur of the moment, foot fetish, pooorn.
Summary: France shows up at Canada's house. Canada interprets it in his usual-but-super-annoying self-deprecating way.

Notes: Belated birthday present

Comments

[alliterations]

This is so wonderful! And hot, but still very, very lovely in a lot of ways. Especially the end. God, the end is amazing. It's very them, in the way Matt would convince himself otherwise and Francis would be entirely bent on catching him.
Great work.

[grosse_averse]

I'm really glad you liked it! :) Thanks very much

[thimbley]

Haha, I think I am too English for this story. I'm fairly positive Arthur would be the same shade of red as I am , had he given it a read. Still, I am in love with your characterisations. Canada is fantastic in his snarkiness that overlays his insecurities, and France's recognition of his shortcomings and his impression on others and how it impacts how they receive him. I know I am not very coherent, but it is 1am. I believe I am allowed.

I hope I'll be seeing more of your work soon, bb. Keep writing! Because you are awesome ♥

[grosse_averse]

You are way too English for this story :P Should I start putting an S disclaimer in front of everything? (kidding babes you know I love you)

[chromatic_coma]

oh god, Canada's reactions were so perfect to everything that was going on. I mean, if someone randomly stopped by my house and started sucking on my feet, I'd be "what the fuck"-ing all over the place 8|

Ah, this was such a good read~ Thanks so much for sharing!

[grosse_averse]

Honestly, I don't know why I wrote this, feet are the one part of the human body that gross me out like nobody's business. I would honestly kick someone in the nose if they tried it. But whatever.

Thank you for reading!

[chromatic_coma]

I honestly would do the same. And, more honesty, a lot of the descriptions here totally grossed me out 8|

But, of course, you're such a good writer I couldn't stop reading ;)

[grosse_averse]

Haha nice save :P

[silver_saber]

Omnomnom. ♥

I admit, I like self-esteem-issues!Canada, and I like him even better when the author is aware of what a little jerk he is in that mode. So I maybe-sort-of squeed through this whole thing. ^///^

Psst: Canada was hitting his head on the "headboard," but they hadn't moved from the couch. D:

My favourite line:
“I know you don’t think I’m serious,” France said, tucking a stray piece of hair behind his ear. “About you. And that is really no surprise because I am aware that nobody really takes me seriously.”
Because no one really does, in fanon or canon, do they? :( I loved the fic, but that's going to stay with me for a while.

[grosse_averse]

I always read fics where Canada is a jack ass and I love it but I wish people would stop passing it off as America/England/whoever getting beat down. Canada is just some paranoid guy who doesn't want to be forgotten. He is Everyman :P Or something. I don't know I need sleep D:

Oh wow that's what happens when I start this in June and finish it in August :P Thanks for the catch!

I hardly ever write about France but I always want to take him seriously. There's enough goofy roofie-slipping France in canon, I want to see some serious business French Revolution/World War/holy-shit-England-betrayed-us-again France (although I admit the last one is pretty hilarious)

Thank you for reading, you rock!

[titanicfreek]

Feet, are one of the things that really squicks me. But I just had to give this a read, because Franadaa *A*

I was ewing at some of the descriptions, because I just hate feet, and foot fetishes I will never ever understand;;;;

But, I really enjoyed this story Especially the little serious side to Francis, I also love Francis' more serious side and love when people write him as having one~ And I just loved the way you wrote Canada, and how he interacted with France <3 Wonderful story

[grosse_averse]

Lol sorry for grossing you out, you were super brave to read this story :P Kudos to you, and thanks for reading!