Pippin Drabble

[gryffinjack]

Well, probably a little more than a drabble, since I've been known to write drabbles six hundred words in length. So this would probably be a vignette.

Near But Far AwayAwareness slowly came back to Pippin, awareness filled with a crushing weight upon his chest that was more than memory. He had been crushed by a Troll during the battle, and now

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[gryffinjack]

Thanks! Write a second part? Hmmm... I'll have to think about that one. This was merely an exercise to get my own feelings off my mind in the middle of the night so I could get some sleep, which is why his feelings came through so clearly. The idea here was that Pippin had sufferred a panic attack. The only thing he needs to be treated for are his battle injuries.

I really don't know what comes next yet.

And thanks for telling me I missed the other slash in "" - it's all fixed now!

[shirebound]

Oooh, this is very powerful. Pippin is in such pain, but has such strength of will.

(You might want to remove all the underlining.)

[gryffinjack]

Thanks, Shirebound. Pippin does have tremendous strength of will, and hopefully it will see him through his panic.

The underlining is all fixed now - thanks!

[surgicalsteel]

There is comfort to go with all that hurt, right?

Lovely stuff!

[gryffinjack]

Thanks!

I certainly hope there is comfort to go with all that hurt, but I don't know yet whether or not I will write it. Pippin had a panic attack, not some injury that needs medicinal treatment. I expect he will be fine once he hears that Frodo and Sam are indeed alive and well.

[grey_wonderer]

WOW! I was on the edge of my seat on this one. The more you built the tension, the further forward I moved. Excellent.

[gryffinjack]

I'm glad you found it so exciting!

[sff_corgi]

Hmmm... I think the best reaction might be:

'AAAAAAAHHHH!!!'

[gryffinjack]

Er... Is that good?