insomniac t scribs

Nov 06, 2010 12:47

Green light the T smells somewhat like brimstone,
Or burning mulch, or those dirty cigarettes
You never ought to pay for. Doorbell chimes
Every time the doors glide open and even
After the tracks break and the door stops opening.

I’m staring at the girl my lover fell in love with.
When people nod in conversation
They sort of cave into their

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gatekeeper07 November 9 2010, 01:53:20 UTC
Last two lines so good, considering Facebook statusing them.

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gum_cheetah November 11 2010, 13:43:43 UTC
thanks! I think I'll read it at an open mic tomorrow.

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gatekeeper07 November 11 2010, 22:04:14 UTC
Whoa... awesome!! Tell me how it goes!

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