[Five Times Fic, R to NC-17]

Jan 28, 2010 19:03

Title Five Times Sirius Walked in On James and Lily (And One Time it Was Remus)
Rating Somewhere between R and NC-17, I think.
Summary I think you guys can figure it out :D

'Padfoot,' James said, and winced. 'Uh, would you possibly believe this isn't what it looks like?' )

five things, harry potter, james/lily

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hogwartshoney January 31 2010, 14:56:07 UTC
Harry called his scowl and raised him what smelled like a shit. Sirius despaired of his life.

L.M.A.O. Omg, seriously. Howled with laughter

Loved this, even the poignant and teary-eyed-making last bit.

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gyzym February 3 2010, 17:03:12 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thanks so much :D

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hoosierbitch February 26 2010, 19:11:49 UTC
0.o

How can you make porn so hot and funny and SAD all in the same story?

*sniffles*

Random note: loved the wand with flags/drawing straws bit!

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gyzym February 26 2010, 19:20:36 UTC
Hahaha. It cracks me up that people are liking the porny things I'm doing, because up until a couple months ago, I'd never touched the stuff. I was very much a, ah, "tastefully sparse" sex scene kind of girl, largely because I felt kind of awkward about it.

And then I figured fuck it, and tried in out in a few HP pieces, and then Neal Caffrey waltzed onto my TV screen and now I think I'm doomed :D

But! To answer your original question: I think the best porn reflects what real sex is actually like, and real sex is hot and funny and sad and sometimes awkward, too. So I strive for at least two of those things in every sex scene I write. I'm sure I fall short sometimes, but that's always my goal! Thanks so much for commenting :D

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capri_chan August 20 2010, 20:42:20 UTC
Oh, jeez, those last two...I can't put my thoughts into words about them, but I can at least tell you that they are very good thoughts.

On a happier note, though, James and Lily totally deserved number four.

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