Comments | gzipping: HP FIC: Redemption [PG, Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore]

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HP FIC: Redemption [PG, Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore]

Oct 18, 2009 21:09

Title: Redemption
Author:gzipping
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1412
Summary: “You know why I'm here,” Snape's voice cracked. “Why do you make me say it, Dumbledore? Do you think I'm not humiliated enough?” A closer look at the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore on the night Snape betrayed Lord Voldemort.
Disclaimers: A smidge of dialogue lifted from Book VII.

( And what will you give me in return, Severus? )

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Comments 6

irockmysock October 19 2009, 12:11:19 UTC

Very good recount of what had happened between them. You described how Albus and Severus would react accordingly! Good job!

I like how you have deeper meaning in your sentences. :)

gzipping October 20 2009, 06:08:05 UTC

Thanks for the read and comment! :)

thebitterend327 October 19 2009, 16:36:33 UTC

That was very poignant and realistic. You kept both Severus and Dumbledore in character and managed to capture the tragedy of the situation.

gzipping October 20 2009, 06:08:25 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

kylei November 2 2009, 07:25:39 UTC

Great job!

gzipping November 2 2009, 23:07:48 UTC

Thanks for the read and comment! :)