Comments | haldoor_honey: H50 Drabble: Handling Rejection 8/15

haldoor_honey

H50 Drabble: Handling Rejection 8/15

Jul 29, 2012 19:22

Characters: Steve McGarrett/Danny Williams
Word Count: 100/1500
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: No spoilers; nothing beyond rejection and the aftermath
Disclaimer: Don't own; don't profit
Author’s Notes: A story written in drabble form: Danny rejects Steve; Steve doesn't react very well.

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h50 fic, drabbles, handling rejection, h50: steve/danny

Comments 14

simplyn2deep July 29 2012, 07:57:23 UTC

I'm sorry Chin, but you have a big mouth. You just don't blab things your drunk friend tells you to other friends. that's just not cool.

haldoor_honey July 29 2012, 08:07:05 UTC

*sigh* You may be right, but maybe Danny needs to know a thing or two.

Thanks for following along; hopefully the next installment will clear up the issue!

gyri July 29 2012, 10:56:49 UTC

I am really enjoying this and am so impressed at how you are writing it. I've never seen a story presented this way. I am so intrigued as to how you pack so much information into each drabble---and keep it a drabble!

The suspense is killing me, but I love it! Yay Danny for not letting Steve run away from you! And yay Chin for being such a good friend!

haldoor_honey July 29 2012, 18:56:39 UTC

Thank you so much! That's a really nice compliment, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it! ;-)

kitmerlot1213 July 29 2012, 15:57:52 UTC

Oh man, now Steve is actually running away! Good for Danny for not letting him. I get that Steve's been hurt but doesn't he still want Danny in his life?

haldoor_honey July 29 2012, 18:57:25 UTC

Yeah, he's just... oh man. You want to slap him sometimes, poor guy!

Thanks for sticking with this! ;-)

rocsfan July 29 2012, 18:52:55 UTC

I love this process! But I want to know ahat happens! It's so clever of you to write the story this way. And well done!

haldoor_honey July 29 2012, 18:58:45 UTC

Thank you! I did consider posting it all in one, but drabbles have more impact as stand-alones, IMO, so... anyway, I'm trying to get two up per day so it's not making everyone wait too long!

Thanks for coming along for the ride! ;-)

rocsfan July 29 2012, 19:01:16 UTC

Oh, no, I think it's much more effective as these individual posts. That adds to the story.

haldoor_honey July 30 2012, 06:13:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it's working this way! ;-)

pippii July 29 2012, 19:50:23 UTC

Well Danny is talking to Steve now..so Steve needs to listen and talk to him too....ohhh boys...
♥hugs

haldoor_honey July 30 2012, 06:13:51 UTC

Oh, he really does, but I'm not sure he's at that point yet.

Thanks again, love - I'm so glad you came along on the ride for this one! *hugs*