[fic] naran saram

Jan 23, 2011 21:09

나란 사람/someone like me [6/?]
Kyuhyun/girl!Sungmin; PG-15 (might change); 25929 words; chaptered
Kyuhyun's best friend will always be his little girl, even when she grows up.
a/n: please inform me of any glaring errors 'ㅅ' apology for the wait at the end of this chapter

part 1 | part 2 | part 3 | part 4 | part 5 | part 6

06 I want to know why you won't love me )

kpop: super junior, otp: kyumin, fic

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*pounces* aerialite January 24 2011, 03:28:17 UTC
Yaaaay! Part 6!~ And don't worry about getting parts out on time or what you write; not this many would be eagerly awaiting to see this on their f-list pages if they didn't care :). Please have a little bit more confidence in your writing~

The confession scene was beautiful ;___;. It always breaks my heart to read about Kyuhyun crying and it was done so well. His conscience really needs to shut up, haha, and he needs to... leave himself alone.

The hinted yewook was a cute touch too :P.

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POUNCE~ TO YOU POUNCE~ TO YOU halomaschine January 25 2011, 02:03:18 UTC
I will try to not psych myself out anymore... and also be better and less derp >_> but I am always saying this and it never comes to fruition.

I hate Kyuhyun crying ;_; why does he do it so often in this fic... who is writing this thing, anyway? >:| I've fought a mental battle of "well, I know some people will scoff if he cries, because he is a ~man and ~men don't cry" but he can't help himself D: he is past the point of being able to respond according to The Rules of Being A Man. Perhaps approaching insanity... really wae does he have a voice in his head ;_;

I'm glad you read this thing~ and more so that you have returned~ I will hopefully resume bugging you with my kyubsession :3 ps sj-m didn't release anything while you were gone, after all. C WOT THEY DID THAR?

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Re: POUNCE~ TO YOU POUNCE~ TO YOU aerialite January 25 2011, 03:22:00 UTC
unnie, like Sungmin, you need to see that you're amazing :<

Kyuhyun is just really frustrated in this fic so crying is a given. I think it's more manly when men do cry, but it still breaks my heart. The voice in his head frustrates me so much lol but in a good way, because that means the characterisation is brilliant :D.

Yay please do bug me, I'm so utterly lonely at the moment ;____;. And I'm very glad they waited for me nothing was released 8D. BUT NOW THAT I'M BACK I DEMAND COMEBACK NEWS ;_____;.

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princess_jaded January 24 2011, 05:31:30 UTC
For the record, it wasn't me. LOL.

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halomaschine January 25 2011, 02:19:21 UTC
I think both of the people you mentioned are innocent~ although maybe they are crafty creepers... 'ㅅ' jk~

Thank you for the encouraging words /sweatdrop I didn't mean to elicit this kind of response from people, I just wanted to be honest, but I do feel a bit better now... although I'm sure the feeling will suffer when I find time to sit down and write more ;_; my defeatist attitude, ide.

Pedo!kyu has been surprisingly popular, I think :D Of course as we all know, IRL pedophilia is repulsive beyond words, and yet when it's a factor in kyumin fic it becomes A+ OTL I didn't want Kyu to overcome his reservations (lol poor descriptor) too quickly as I often see it happen in fan fiction, but I think most readers are ready to lead me to the guillotine at this point D:

Oh did I forget to say "the end" after temptress!sungmin cornered helpless!kyu in his own apartment? Sry, let me just go back and edit that in~

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hit0rigurashi January 24 2011, 03:58:53 UTC
yey!!! an update!!!
no worries, whatever chaptered fic i start reading, i'll wait and wait and see thru it to the end, no matter how long the next chapter comes...
so i was actually waiting for this one and was pleasantly surprised to see an update...
i love the confession, and i hope kyuhyunnie would just put all his reservations and stubborn conscience in a trash bag for the time being so he can jump on hot sungmin already LOL...
please update soon =)

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halomaschine January 25 2011, 02:26:17 UTC
Faithful reader ;_; you are a thousand times more patient than I am. If I could, I would give you a lollipop that was shaped like Kyuhyun's head. Of course the longer you enjoyed it, the more deformed and unrecognizable it would become, but still. Kyuheadlollipop... :D

IKR, if sexual frustration was the only factor for Kyuhyun, idk why he wouldn't be all over her the minute she kissed him, much less ~pressed herself against him sensually~ d;fgihdfgoi this is exactly why I'm incapable of writing anything sexual, lulz. Poor idiot Kyu just stands there, rubbing her stomach beneath her shirt? and probably thinking "hm, I want to put a baby in here~"

Thank you for continuing to read and taking the time to comment, I hope I can update before another grossly long amount of time passes ;-;

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princess_jaded January 24 2011, 04:09:02 UTC
You're not terrible for having a life and for feeling like you should do your characters and story justice. The point is you've written something so worthwhile and real that most people who read are either too enthralled to know what to say, or too intimidated to admit there is someone who can take them to another world entirely with simple words ( ... )

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halomaschine January 25 2011, 02:54:55 UTC
A... a whole new worldddddd~ sry too busy bumbling around like an embarrassed twat because you are so flattering u_u ( ... )

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nadhimechan January 24 2011, 04:14:12 UTC
;AAAAAAAA; finally and update T^T

Sungmin is so brave! Shame on you Kyu because Min is way more mature than you! xDDD Min go go Min! ^0^

please update as soon as you can :) I think the rating will go higher yes? xD

Kyumin FTW <333

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halomaschine January 25 2011, 03:05:28 UTC
I'm glad you mentioned Sungmin's bravery~ to be honest, when I first thought of this scene (several months ago u_u) it went very differently in my head... but because of how the rest of the story had turned out, I thought it made more sense for Sungmin to just get tired of waiting and... and yeah. Brave!Sungmin~

The... the rating should go higher... probably... perhaps D: It's kind of up in the air right now, but I am aware that many people have been wanting them to just LSDIUFHLAUGD already. Sadly I don't think I possess the pervy skill to write such a scene but if it begs to be written I have little choice /sobs

Thank you for reading and commenting~ especially with sprouts!eunhyuk icon :P

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nadhimechan January 25 2011, 11:47:32 UTC
awww~ <33 hahaha she must be tired!! >.<

hahaha sprout!eunhyuk is cute :D but in some ways it's kinda disgusting. hahahaha xDD

hahahah I want it to go higher~ but it's up to you la xD I'm just a reader lol~~ <333

your welcome~

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