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halomaschine

[fic] naran saram

Jan 23, 2011 21:09

나란 사람/someone like me [6/?]
Kyuhyun/girl!Sungmin; PG-15 (might change); 25929 words; chaptered
Kyuhyun's best friend will always be his little girl, even when she grows up.
a/n: please inform me of any glaring errors 'ㅅ' apology for the wait at the end of this chapter

part 1 | part 2 | part 3 | part 4 | part 5 | part 6

( 06 I want to know why you won't love me )

kpop: super junior, otp: kyumin, fic

Comments 56

onetruemei January 24 2011, 12:21:51 UTC

You don't need to apologize. :3 If other people are impatient, then your fic doesn't deserve to be read by them~ ^^
The right plot hits writers at the right time~ we should never rush something just to please our readers. Sometimes, readers will appreciate your writing even though it's been so long since the last time you updated because they know the update is worth it~ :)

It hasn't been a month! Don't worry! And I was actually amazed, because last time you updated this, I was having an exam the day after. Now, I am going to have an exam tomorrow again. XD

This is sure a stress reliever. A way to at least freshen up before going to war, (i.e. gazillions of handouts).

Let's go to my comment now okay?

I can say that Sungmin really has balls! I knew Kyuhyun will be chicken forever. And it's all thanks to Sungmin that they can possibly be together if Kyuhyun will stop being a bastard and actually step up for once. I just hope Kyuhyun will stop running away. ._____ ( ... )

halomaschine January 26 2011, 00:41:09 UTC

The right plot hits writers at the right time~

This is so true ;-; I think I fail to keep it in mind and stress myself out trying to force things sometimes.

I hope your exam was not harrowing D: when is your next exam? I will try to be prepared for it, lol >_>

Sungmin's balls > Kyuhyun's balls (or lack thereof). Perhaps Kyuhyun will marvel at Sungmin's balls and be inspired to act more ballsy. I'm never going to use the word balls ever again after this comment ㅠㅠ When I first thought of this fic, Kyuhyun was much more... in control and less delusional at this point of the story, but when I got to writing it, somehow it changed and I felt like his character wasn't ready to be brave yet - and if Sungmin didn't come to him, they would never have a chance :( Hopefully her bravery will teach him a lesson or two, or perhaps he'll sit back and let her take the initiative... which would lead to girl!Sungmin topping the hell out of oppa!Kyuhyun, in an epic smut that I am certainly incapable of writing D:

Whether there is smut (lol I have ( ... )

onetruemei January 26 2011, 11:17:55 UTC

OH! (: My exam will be in a few weeks time! (: And don't worry, my exam was better than the last one! I think I will pass this one with flying colors~ (:

girl!Sungmin taking the initiative and topping the hell out of oppa!Kyuhyun sounds interesting though. but of course, Kyuhyun should grow some spherical-thingies-that-bounces too (I refuse to use the word "balls" again). (: I think we're on the same note with writing smut too... I would never learn how to do it, I suck big time. TT~TT but oh well, maybe practice makes perfect... so I now I am off to making the worst smut in the entire LJ fanfic world. Hola!

I JUST REALIZED THAT I USED THE WORD "BALLS" THERE AFTER I SAID I WON'T BE USING IT TOO. I FAIL OTL.

flowmarine January 24 2011, 15:00:50 UTC

It's okay you know. I think you don't even have to apologize if you haven't updated sooner, 'cause all of us have a life. So I think that's good~

Actually, I still like the flow of the story and I'm kinda glad that he already knew what Sungmin thinks 'cause I think that's what he needs. He needs Sungmin more than anything.

oh and really thank you for updating! ^___^ It really made my day and everyone who loves you and your writing! ♥

rubyls January 24 2011, 15:40:42 UTC

fuck. this is gorgeous.
read the entire thing in one go (and i really really don't do that often, i lose patience with chaptered fics) and jesus. i am legit heartbroken.

kyuhyun's struggle fucking hurts. it is intense and worrying and realistic and exact. and bloody annoying, but that's what makes this all the more real. and i like your prose, no flashy big words, no fireworks or fanfare, just telling the story of kyuhyun's heart and it is beautiful. it's clear as day with what kyuhyun's feeling, and i think that fits so well with this story ( ... )

halomaschine January 26 2011, 03:06:06 UTC

I lose patience with chaptered fics, too ;-; perhaps that is another reason why I'm so aware of how long it takes me to update ( ... )

rubyls January 26 2011, 12:02:35 UTC

keke i don't usually read chaptered fics if i don't follow them from the start, so girl, you have really got something different right here, let me tell you. because when i see chaptered fics i'm like ...oh god and i'm just really lazy to read like 2394237 chapters or whatever especially if the story isn't worth it. but you reeled me in in your first, and i really wanted to know what was happening next, and that is why you've got me writing a little essay to you here! :)

it is. it totally is because idk i have seen so much drama recently irl and stuff and really, people can be so focused on their own world and just not see the logic in a lot of things. so i find kyuhyun's struggle fucking annoying, but i can totally understand that. completely. that's what makes your fic realistic, you know ( ... )

vin11lover January 24 2011, 16:18:17 UTC

i...i miss too kick you~ *kicks*
i think i forgot to comment before =p
but dont forget i always read your fic xDDD

and finally minnie take the step. >.< i'm glad, because i think kyu will not have the guts to do that.
and i figure he's having imaginary friend now. -___-
creepy.i learn psychology and it's still creepy for me. LOL
and i dont really get the last scene. did sungmin go and catch kyu in his apartment?is this still the day she's graduating? 0_0

so, next chappie will be the scene of lovey dovey kyu and min, right? and will be the scene where kyu kick his imaginary friend away. xD

id he still reject her, then i will hunt you down. yes, YOU. because you are the writer. xDDD

<333

halomaschine January 26 2011, 03:20:32 UTC

I miss being covered with bruises from your unique way of showing affection ( ... )

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halomaschine January 26 2011, 03:36:00 UTC

I mentioned to the commenter above you about the circumstances of them being at Kyu's apartment; it is the continuation of the very first scene of the story, but I know I didn't transition very well into it, I apologize :( Like the other scene breaks, where there is no lead up to the moment, there is no lead up written to this scene, save for what's in the first chapter of the story. Some things may come up later in the next chapter, but I don't want to give too much away? But since Sungmin is here and talking a lot >_> maybe we will see into her head a bit more, and how she came to be on Kyu's doorstep ( ... )