Comments | hammerxsword: Fic: The Right Place, Young Wizards, Tom/Carl

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Fic: The Right Place, Young Wizards, Tom/Carl

Sep 07, 2005 23:49

Comments 34

oakdoitter September 7 2005, 21:27:33 UTC

Yay for more Yound Wizards fanfic! Essp. Tom & Carl... and I really like what you did with these two here. It's sweet and sad (but happy too) and emminently sqeeble-able. Caught things perfectly, you did.

hammerxsword September 7 2005, 23:43:30 UTC

Aww, thanks! There really should be a lot more Tom and Carl fic (they're so very married.)

Of course, it you do want more YW fanfiction, check out myriadwords (yeah, I'm pimping, I have no shame...;-)

veryshortlist September 7 2005, 21:37:54 UTC

Aww, lovely.

hammerxsword September 7 2005, 23:44:12 UTC

Thank you!

labellementeuse September 7 2005, 22:25:06 UTC

TOMANCARLSQUEEEEE.

they so cute.

Yeah, you know, that's all I got. I just... ee! Adorable!

Some minor grammar things...
The house was a lot quieter without the Macaw.
Should it really be macaw? Without the capital?

they had also proud of that darn bird.
They were also proud, they had also been proud. Just a tiny typo. ;)

Anyway. That over with... I love. You rock. Eee. !!

hammerxsword September 7 2005, 23:52:04 UTC

Eeek! Thanks for pointing those out. Will edit after reply here.

Thank you. Am very glad you liked it - was very nervous about it; was it true to the series, the characters, etc. But it apparently has worked. Yay!

nikolche September 8 2005, 03:05:47 UTC

[does a teeny squeal for Tom/Carl]

Brilliantly done, I love the combination of saddness and...squeeability? See, you've got me at a loss for words. =P

hammerxsword September 8 2005, 03:37:42 UTC

Thanks! Squeeability...hmm...might have to start using that. ;-)

nikolche September 8 2005, 16:20:32 UTC

Lol, start a new rating type deal...

Rating: PG
Squeeability: 9.75

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hammerxsword September 18 2005, 00:42:53 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :-)