Better or Worse? [Oneshot]

[hammiexsquirrel]

Title: Better or Worse?
Author: Ani
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Chiitaro
Summary: What happens when what you want clashes with what is right? Will you be selfish...or not?
Disclaimer: I don't own JE

Comments

[tetsuha]

I'm not a big fan of angst, but I have to say I really enjoyed reading it! I didn't really get the last part, though.

[hammiexsquirrel]

Well, some people no like angst, but I love it <3

Cuz Chiitaro aren't supposed to be together, so if they get found out, they're...dead XD

[yahachii]

"Who in their sane mind runs away from home at this ungodly hour?"
- I can imagine Ryutaro saying this. And this made me want to love him more. I wonder why this line.

"Instead, all he felt was a hollow sort of emptiness. He thought maybe this was how birds who lost their ability to fly felt. Grounded, weak, and hopeless. He knew the abyss in his heart was now so deep it would be nearly impossible to ever mend."
- I like this part... really really like. This is the part which my heart understood faster than my head did.

"You shouldn't cry. Angels aren't supposed to."
- My favorite line. <3

[hammiexsquirrel]

OMG LONG :O

Cuz it shows how much he cares and worries over Chinen ♥

Angst <3333 Can't go wrong with it =3

LOLOLOLOL

Cool angst? o.o I've never heard anyone use that term before xD Erm...I guess? XDDDD Oooh~ that's interesting XD

Thanks for the long comment ^^

[yahachii]

ahaha.. well, when I'm thinking of how to describe this angst, the word COOL just popped up in my head and I was like "ah, that's the word!"

this is the only fanfic that I called cool angst so far.. haha.. whoa, still inlove with it ( your story, I mean).. :D

[hammiexsquirrel]

haha I see. It's a good word to use =3

Thanks ♥

[ayang902]

omg ur fics are so amazing! O.O
and this one *points* is practically what my most recent request is for! xDD *inspiration* gahhh chiitaro forbidden love <33
uwaa it makes me wanna get started writing it.. but i have so much more to write first... -_____- (lol! xD)
i love how u made ryutaro so... forceful? hahaa and chii's so denial-full~ ^^;; angst ftw! X3

[hammiexsquirrel]

Ahaha, thanks. They're okay :)

o.o Orly? This just came from Ryutaro pushing Chinen up against a wall, I swear XD

Never get anywhere if you don't start :) FORCEFUL!RYUTARO IS HOT, 'SPECIALLY WHEN CHINEN'S BEING RESISTANT ♥

I'm weird XD

[ayang902]

xDD at least better than mine by far! ^^;;
lol! xD i would like to see that happen... *COUGH*
*nods* yupyups, good advice XD
HAH! xDDDDD maybe chii should try being resistant more often then... LOL xD arent we all..? hahahaha

[hammiexsquirrel]

Nah, I'm sure yours are good too :)

DANG THEY SHOULD BE IN A DRAMA AND DO THAT T.T

[kaudude618]

-flail-

This is so amazing!!!!! Ryutaro is so hawt!

... wow, this might really seem strange since this is the first time I've commented on your work (because I just got a livejournal), but let me say, all your work is really amazing!

[hammiexsquirrel]

/flails with you

Ahaha, it's really not XDD But I agree with the Ryutaro is hot part <3

...nah, I know other writers who are much more amazing than me :)