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Rewind and Press Play [Oneshot]

Jan 22, 2011 15:00

Title: Rewind and Press Play
Author: Ani
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 for excessive emo-ing
Pairings: Chiitaro (sorta), fake!Yamachii, hinted!Yamajima
Summary: Ryutaro and Chinen used to get along more than well. But relationships can't always endure over time.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE

( Ryutaro remembered the old days, when Chinen used to hug him randomly for no real reason. )

fanfiction: one-shot, p: yamajima, yamada ryosuke, p: chiitaro, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, nakajima yuuto

Comments 37

ayang902 January 29 2011, 19:06:00 UTC

awww that was so sad!! ><
uwaaa i love this fic!! i love how you put in all the emotions and conflictions that they were feeling.. i felt so bad for the both of them :( and all the details were amazing!! ^^
sequel, please? X3

hammiexsquirrel January 30 2011, 04:38:26 UTC

Meh...my emotions can be improved upon, but thank you ^^

I'm quite anal on details LOL

IF IT TURNS OUT GOOD

ayang902 January 30 2011, 04:42:14 UTC

aww your too harsh on yourself ^^ you did well, ne? :)
xDDD its okayyy, its still great!! X3
haha im sure it will! ganbatte~~

hammiexsquirrel February 5 2011, 06:24:42 UTC

haha, I am, I am. I always feel like I could have written better :/

Thank you!

Meh...

candyapplegirls January 30 2011, 04:32:08 UTC

You and Joanna have this amazing ability to make me cry. ;~;

Why'd you let go Ryutaro?

EMO CHINEN. ♥

OMG, I LOVE Mama Chinen. ♥

hammiexsquirrel January 30 2011, 04:39:17 UTC

WE'RE INNOCENT ^______________^

He was scared of rejection. And wasn't sure if he would be accepted if he chased. TAT

MAGNET <3

She's his mom. She noticed the little stuff that happened XD