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What If I Said I Love You? [Chapter 4]

Mar 25, 2011 21:44

Title: What If I Said I Love You? [Chapter 4]
Author: Ani
Genre: AU, slight angst, drama, eventually fluff
Rating: PG
Pairings: Chiitaro, hinted!Yamachii, flash-of!Yamajima
Summary: Best friends don't always fall in love.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE

( 'You're really still here?' )

fanfiction: multi-chapter, p: yamajima, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, nakajima yuuto, p: yamachii, series: what if i said i love you?, p: chiitaro

Comments 11

umita March 26 2011, 23:07:08 UTC

goes to read from chapter 1 :D
thankyouuuuu ani for morrrreeee chiiitarooo
love them!
i love you too! :)

waiting Shadows [Chapter 8] XDDDDDDDDD

hammiexsquirrel March 27 2011, 04:58:32 UTC

We need more Chiitaro T.T I miss them

That's not coming for a long time, school's gonna start in like two days >_>;;; Please bear with me orz

umita March 27 2011, 13:48:57 UTC

GANHMNWAMAMNLWULWA THIS CHAP AKWLAAWAWAWAA SO FREAKING MADE ME BLUSHED AS HELL WJLPSOSJJHUW XDDDD
CHIITARO <33

yeah you right, miss them too .____.

well this fic, i like ryuu even more
i love his character ne~ XDDDDD
“And you even kissed me back.”
“I-I did not.”
“Did too~”
“Did not! Did not did not did not did not!”
that was cuuuuuuuteeeee lol XD

not for now? *puppy eyes* okay, gud luck for your study! :) I'll be waiting patiently,.... I try XDDDD

hammiexsquirrel March 28 2011, 04:43:26 UTC

HAHAHAHAHA

I wanna read more Chiitaro. Or see them in action T.T

PFFT WHO WOULDN'T LIKE RYUTARO?! 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Bickering!Chiitaro ♥ They're like kids XD

I only wrote maybe 1/4 of it? @.@ Sankyuu

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kusumi_koharu March 27 2011, 05:20:30 UTC

omgggggggggg I really, really love this *___*

daw, why is Yuto mad though? o_o

hammiexsquirrel March 28 2011, 04:44:38 UTC

lololol thanks for reading and commenting :)

Yuuto's mad cuz he likes Yamada and thought Yamada liked Chinen, so being the selfless good friend that he is, Yuuto fully supported Yamachii, but then Ryutaro came in. It was very subtly hinted XD

hara_89 March 27 2011, 05:56:45 UTC

GYAAAAAAAHAAAA~~~

Kissing Chiitaro!!! SAHDIFHEOJP'DJWWOFNEIHE9PVEFPEOJWLFB!!!

I'm sorry, I think I got too excited!
But this is so good!!! >.<

“You look really cute in PJ’s, you know?” My face reddened; I hadn’t changed yet. “But-” He came closer and I instinctively stepped back. “You know - “ Closer. Back. “ - what - “ Closer again. Back again. “ - you look - ” Closer. My heart jolted as my back hit the wall. “ - even cuter in?” His soft brown orbs gazed into my own as my breath came out in short pants. “Hmm?” he prompted, touching noses with me.

This part is such a tease...
hehehhehhe
:DDDDD

hammiexsquirrel March 28 2011, 04:45:33 UTC

IF ONLY IT COULD HAPPEN IN A CONCERT OR SOMETHING ;_;

Dang, I almost hyperventilated writing Ryutaro @////@

hara_89 March 28 2011, 05:00:30 UTC

And I almost hyperventilated reading your Chiitaro >.<
Gyaaaa~~

tingke2104 May 10 2011, 07:46:40 UTC

Awesomeeee cutenessss!! <3
Wonder what's wrong with Yuto.
But yay for Ryutaro's advancement. <3