Aww! <3 This chapter's so sweet. I love how Akira's so worried and Hikaru's trying to calm him down, and Hikaru gets hurt-- but he's still sweet and... *melts*
May 5th? *blinks* That'll be interesting.
Hee. And Ogata.. *cracks up*
Ogata: HE SAID HE WAS 18! Police officer:... He? Sir, we're talking about the young woman you went home with yesterday. Ogata:...
This chapter proved excessively difficult to write only because I want everything to be all-happy, all-the-time. The fact that I somehow managed to make it all-happy in the end is something that shocks and surprises me. Glad you liked!
Everyone loves the Ogata bit. ^_^ I was terribly tempted to make it add on something about, "having sex with a minor... he looked suspiciously like you, Akira", but figured that went a little too far into territory that I don't particularly feel like exploring.
Even if the whole world knows that you had a dick up your ass and liked it, that doesn't ..." <= Wow... Hikaru is rather blunt this time with Akira... unlike the previous time when he so careful... it make Hikaru much in character :) Always loved this blunt, determined and straightforward guy [grins]
"Are you this ashamed of our relationship?" Hikaru's eyes were flashing in the darkness. <= Hikaru must be very hurt by Akira's behavior to actually asked this question...Insecurity and frustration are 2 emotions that dun suited Hikaru :p
Isn't it obvious? You made me love you." <= that is the sweetest thing Akira had ever spoken :) and him went to buy a similar ring for Hikaru and announcing their engagement on Weekly Go... wow, i'm so touched that i could cried if i'm in Hikaru's shoes [wide smiles] Akira know that May 5th is an impt date to Hikaru... the day that Sai disappeared going to be day of their engagement... so Hikaru going to tell Akira about Sai on their engagement nite
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I figure that by this point in their relationship, Hikaru is comfortable with letting Akira know his feelings, even if Akira is still a little uncomfortable doing the same in return.
Hikaru knows that Akira loves him, so Akira's actions feel a little like Hikaru's being betrayed or being hidden. He thought that wasn't going to be an issue.
You'll see (and by this point probably have). ^_^
I liked tacking on that little line by Akira. He's obviously enjoying the sex, so why deny it?
Ogata strikes me as the type to have sex with little boys, but I figured I'd leave that up to everyone's imagination.
Very good chapter. xD [as always ;] To tell the truth Ogata looks like the type who would acctually do something like that. The way he looks at Akira sometimes..._o_ I knew he'd get cought sooner or later, although I still feel sad for him. Poor guy...xP I'm happy that both Hikaru and Akira have grown up to have a serious relationship like that.^^ I hope that you'll make them live happily ever after. xD
I neglected to mention just how underage the person was... I imagine them (more than likely a male) around the age of Hikaru and Akira at the beginning of Hikago because, really, Ogata is such a perv. ^_^
While this series is now over, I do intend to go back every now and again and revisit it whether with more drabbles or a full-fledged fic. I refuse to write something where they adopt a child and raise him/her, but I may even write a Waya/Isumi fic with this same universe in mind. ^_^ I definitely intend to keep this game going, no matter how long the next move takes.
News says that Ogata was arrested yesterday for sex with a minor. LoL For the longest time I though this was just a shared joke between them to make Akira feel better - and because Hikaru is vindictive.
It's not a crime in ALL places.. cheer up Ogata-san!
What a darling chapter.. I want to see how the rest of the story finishes... and Akira... is sweet.. Hikaru is to.. but he's not the one being eaten *grin*
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May 5th? *blinks* That'll be interesting.
Hee. And Ogata.. *cracks up*
Ogata: HE SAID HE WAS 18!
Police officer:... He? Sir, we're talking about the young woman you went home with yesterday.
Ogata:...
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Police officer:... He? Sir, we're talking about the young woman you went home with yesterday.
Ogata:...
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What the.. the minx. She said she just want to watch *is ded*
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Everyone loves the Ogata bit. ^_^ I was terribly tempted to make it add on something about, "having sex with a minor... he looked suspiciously like you, Akira", but figured that went a little too far into territory that I don't particularly feel like exploring.
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"Are you this ashamed of our relationship?" Hikaru's eyes were flashing in the darkness. <= Hikaru must be very hurt by Akira's behavior to actually asked this question...Insecurity and frustration are 2 emotions that dun suited Hikaru :p
Isn't it obvious? You made me love you." <= that is the sweetest thing Akira had ever spoken :) and him went to buy a similar ring for Hikaru and announcing their engagement on Weekly Go... wow, i'm so touched that i could cried if i'm in Hikaru's shoes [wide smiles] Akira know that May 5th is an impt date to Hikaru... the day that Sai disappeared going to be day of their engagement... so Hikaru going to tell Akira about Sai on their engagement nite ( ... )
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Hikaru knows that Akira loves him, so Akira's actions feel a little like Hikaru's being betrayed or being hidden. He thought that wasn't going to be an issue.
You'll see (and by this point probably have). ^_^
I liked tacking on that little line by Akira. He's obviously enjoying the sex, so why deny it?
Ogata strikes me as the type to have sex with little boys, but I figured I'd leave that up to everyone's imagination.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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I'm happy that both Hikaru and Akira have grown up to have a serious relationship like that.^^ I hope that you'll make them live happily ever after. xD
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While this series is now over, I do intend to go back every now and again and revisit it whether with more drabbles or a full-fledged fic. I refuse to write something where they adopt a child and raise him/her, but I may even write a Waya/Isumi fic with this same universe in mind. ^_^ I definitely intend to keep this game going, no matter how long the next move takes.
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It's not a crime in ALL places.. cheer up Ogata-san!
What a darling chapter.. I want to see how the rest of the story finishes... and Akira... is sweet.. Hikaru is to.. but he's not the one being eaten *grin*
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