Parts of this are very funny, especially the bit about the post-industrial society, however, there are a few things which could be changed:
Navy blue and white (yellow and white are trinity college) stash, not tracksuits.
Keeper hates melon. All citrus fruits are enjoyed though, especially lemons.
Keeper was not aware keeper had a gender.
"Enter, for the love of shiny objects enter!" is actually a misquote. The line was "Enter, for the love of all that is blue, enter" and it was thought, rather than spoken. Keepers generally try to appear as unruffled as possible.
What are slacks?
I cannot emphasise this enough, Keeper does NOT wear tarten. Ever.
*makes note of all that* Will be changed when I edit. As for the gender, I decided Keeper was male for the purposes of this tale, due to the overabundance of estrogen. Originally, Philippe was my only male character. Does keeper wear any patterns?
Ordinarily, only ever when rowing and that just a white stripe along the arms/ side of body against a dark blue background. A black shirt with grey pinstripes has also been known to be worn once or twice as part of a formal outfit.
Generally there keeper's clothes are rather drab, but practical and suitable for skulking around on cold nights in. Anoraks are reviled.
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Navy blue and white (yellow and white are trinity college) stash, not tracksuits.
Keeper hates melon. All citrus fruits are enjoyed though, especially lemons.
Keeper was not aware keeper had a gender.
"Enter, for the love of shiny objects enter!" is actually a misquote. The line was "Enter, for the love of all that is blue, enter" and it was thought, rather than spoken. Keepers generally try to appear as unruffled as possible.
What are slacks?
I cannot emphasise this enough, Keeper does NOT wear tarten. Ever.
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As for the gender, I decided Keeper was male for the purposes of this tale, due to the overabundance of estrogen. Originally, Philippe was my only male character.
Does keeper wear any patterns?
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Generally there keeper's clothes are rather drab, but practical and suitable for skulking around on cold nights in. Anoraks are reviled.
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