Dummy With the Rapture (SPN, Dean/Castiel, NC-17)

[hansbekhart]

Title: Dummy with the Rapture
Author: hansbekhart
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Summary: “There’s a room,” Castiel says, pressing his hand against his own chest, “in a house, in a town, where this man used to pray. Where he’d tell God every secret, unworthy thought he’d ever had and be forgiven for them. It matters, Dean. It matters to me that we

Comments

[fleshflutter]

That's absolutely beautiful. It's bleak but hopeful all at once, and I really like how you didn't skim over Sam's absence. Really lovely work, darling. <3

[hansbekhart]

Thank you so much, babe! It wouldn't be right for Sam to be completely gone, physically and mentally ... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[arantzain]

Goes now into my list of like, better than orgasm writing.

You're so talented, darling, and I'm so glad to have you back.

[hansbekhart]

Heehee!! That's a tall feat, man, I'm not sure if I agree ;). But I do say thank you!

I'm really glad to be back, babe :).

[sparky77]

That was just gorgeous and perfect and all sorts of other awesome adjectives. I just loved the mood you set up, and Dean... I just wanted to give him a huge hug.

Fabulous story!

[hansbekhart]

Awwww, me too. Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you dug it.

[tabaqui]

I...
Okay, let me say this and then i'll say something else, too, and hopefully it'll all be...okay. Or whatever.

I kind of hated this. Everything going to hell and gone and Sam's *not there*, the one thing Dean gave up everything for and he's not there and it's just....

Too fucking much.

The pockets of Armageddon are weird and creepy, the pockets of 'normal' are just as creepy. Dean getting to meet Jonah was cool and heartbreaking, Cas coming back was awesome and Dean, Dean....believing.
*cries*

But Sam isn't there, and ultimately, that breaks my heart.

Lovely, horrible stuff, bay-bee.
*sniffle*

[hansbekhart]

Awww, my poor heart ... I'm so sorry that it made you feel that way, but glad that you read through it anyway. And that you ... enjoyed the parts that didn't make it so glaringly obvious that Sam wasn't there?

[tabaqui]

OH, i enjoyed the whole thing. I was lovely and so hurty and sweet, in parts, and so terribly *hard* to read but so beautiful.

But, yeah. Sam being gone...that's just so not right. He should *always* be there. Dean'n'Sam forevah, you know?
*sniffles a little*

I really did like it, bay-bee, despite my paaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaain.
:)

[hansbekhart]

Well, yay! Thank you :).

If I was going to write a longer story, Sam would've been in it. And this thing made me angry when I was writing it, because I had so many ideas relating to the canon and characters and mythology, but I had to sort of keep them contained, you know? It wouldn't have worked for the framing.

[exeterlinden]

Wow, this step-by-step Armageddon is really scary, I like how you wrote that. Vivid imagery throughout. A really good read.

[hansbekhart]

Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun with the apocalyptic imagery.