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[hari_kari]

Strange Condition 
by Harikari

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Part Five

Warm beads of water rained down onto Mohinder's naked skin.  The water flowed in rivulets down his lean body - shoulders, back, legs - before pooling momentarily in the bathtub, disappearing down the drain.

The geneticist suppressed a pleased groan.  The warmth and steady pressure of the water spraying

Comments

[doctor_caduceus]

I love this fic, and I want more of it as soon as possible. The line "Why do you always ruin us?" sums up the relationship, from both directions, so well.

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're liking it so far, and that you think the line 'Why do you always ruin us?' sums Mylar up so well. I'll try and have the next part ready and posted soon. =)

[megmatthews20]

*Waits impatiently for the next chapter*

I love the tension and build-up here...Sylar's needs, Mohinder's fears, Mohinder showering... *EG*

Gah, so happy you posted this...it is definitely moving toward making today a good day!

cheers

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll try and have the next chapter out soon(ish). ^_^

[mabetini]

OMG MORE PLEASE!!!

You make this so hot XD And the drawing; AWWWWWW!!!

We all know Mohinder really wants it and Sylar will get it no matter WHAT!

Guh, love this story times a million!

[hari_kari]

Thanks so much! I'm gonna' try and get the next chapter out soon. I appreciate the comment and the kind words, thanks! :)

[levitatethis]

You know what really works for me in this chapter? How it all takes place in one place and yet so much happens with Mohinder's inner thoughts and then plot wise with the drawings and then Sylar almost forcing more that there's this incredible sense of tension throughout the entire thing

[hari_kari]

Oh, wow. Your comments/reviews always make my day. Thank you! I'm really glad you're liking it so far - and was glad to find that Sylar's 'loss of control' and the fact that he stopped for Mohinder shone through. Thanks again for the wonderful comments! I'll try and have the next chapter out soon. :)

[anonymous]

Wow I really really love it XD "your" Sylar is awesome...kidnapped Mohinder is cool xD Please write next sequel *begs*

[hari_kari]

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it so far - and that you think my Sylar is 'awesome'! I'm going to try and get the next chapter out soon. :D