AN: Much thanks to my flist (and to levitatethis, in particular) for reading this chapter before I thought it fit for comms and giving me some very helpful crit/suggestions. -----
Okay, things certainly are happening. Poor Mohinder, no wonder he's spooked. I so cannot wait to find out what Harris's ability is. As for the boys, man Sylar trying to feed Mohinder was cute. Those messages on Mohinder's phone were lovely, too! Mmmm. I love this story. Thank you for sharing! <3
I've been reading the 6 chapters in one sit, it's that good! I love the dynamics and tension between Mohinder and Syler and I can't wait to see where you take this.
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I bow before your art.
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Okay, things certainly are happening. Poor Mohinder, no wonder he's spooked. I so cannot wait to find out what Harris's ability is. As for the boys, man Sylar trying to feed Mohinder was cute. Those messages on Mohinder's phone were lovely, too! Mmmm. I love this story. Thank you for sharing! <3
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continue writing, please :D
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