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May 29, 2008 06:44

Strange Condition
by Harikari

AN: Much thanks to my flist (and to levitatethis, in particular) for reading this chapter before I thought it fit for comms and giving me some very helpful crit/suggestions. 
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Part Six

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strange condition, sylar/mohinder, fanfiction

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altogetherisi May 30 2008, 11:24:40 UTC
I adore this story, please keep writing and update soon, I can't wait to see what happens!

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hari_kari May 30 2008, 12:40:29 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying it so far, I'll definitely try and update soon! :)

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delilahdraken May 30 2008, 15:02:55 UTC
Wow. This story is just wow.

I bow before your art.

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hari_kari June 2 2008, 12:40:32 UTC
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the kind words about my writing. I'm glad you're liking this so far, I'm gonna' try and update soon. :)

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teecub May 30 2008, 19:03:53 UTC
Snow. What a perfect way to end the chapter.

Okay, things certainly are happening. Poor Mohinder, no wonder he's spooked. I so cannot wait to find out what Harris's ability is. As for the boys, man Sylar trying to feed Mohinder was cute. Those messages on Mohinder's phone were lovely, too! Mmmm. I love this story. Thank you for sharing! <3

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hari_kari June 2 2008, 12:37:51 UTC
Thank you! I'll try and have the next part up soon. <3

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yay XD anonymous May 30 2008, 21:09:18 UTC
awww... thank you so much :D (my english is bad so I can't really say how much I liked it, it was.... amazing, cool, stunning,.... xD )

continue writing, please :D

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Re: yay XD hari_kari June 2 2008, 12:37:03 UTC
Thank you! I really appreciate the kind words about my writing. I'll try and have the next part up soon. :D

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ivy_b June 2 2008, 11:27:00 UTC
I've been reading the 6 chapters in one sit, it's that good! I love the dynamics and tension between Mohinder and Syler and I can't wait to see where you take this.

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hari_kari June 2 2008, 12:36:02 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're liking it so far. I'll try and have the next part up soon. :)

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