232. (fic) two

[harinezumi_kun]

title: two
rating/genre: pg; romance
pairing(s): ohmiya
words: 1,234
summary: even just a little longer, don’t say anything, just follow me.
disclaimer: FICTION.
notes: ehrmehrgerd, song-fic D: just stretching some rusty writing muscles.

Comments

[ohmiyaplz]

augh I feel happy, but this just feels bittersweet, in a sense.

ooh how I've missed your writing! ♡ thank you so much for sharing this c:

[harinezumi_kun]

aw, thank you so much for reading! i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[wjktl]

it's love deshou!!!!!

[walking_orgy]

SONGFIC!! *_____*

Basically, I think every Nino solo and every Ohno solo are not-so-secretly songs they sing for each other. Then again, almost EVERY song has an underlying Ohmiya!meaning to me, when I am being honest. XD

I have to admit, I wasn't too hooked on their new soli, but I'm growing to like them more and more, and THIS is definitely helping me to really enjoy Two a great deal! ♥

I think the all-over-the-place..ness really suits the rhythm of the song, and the overall feeling.
And i lovelovelove part 02 (well.. the 'last' part, so to speak^^).. I love that even though everything is revealed during the other parts, there's still a tingling sensation of anticipation that makes my skin crawl, and THAT, I think, is a brilliant peak to this fic.

[himitsu_17]

HAPPY NEW YEAR :D

Seriously after reading this fic I didn't know what to feel :o It's beautiful but yet so sad all along ... :o

Anyway I loved it ♥

Thanks so much for writing and sharing ~

[nandemo_nai]

i haven't read any fanfics for a pretty long time, then started recently and was dissapointed because couldn't find anything fitting my personal taste but then there was your name on some list of fanfics and i was really glad to see it, because i remember you from my "reader's past" (i don't know if this use of words is understandable in english xD anyway, closer to the point.)

i like it being not chronological. (i have some kind of a weakness for such things). it was really bittersweet, somehow more bitter than sweet, i think (maybe because of that permanent feeling of despair in both Ohno and Nino). and those streetlights, and the drive itself in the last piece of text became somehow even more charming and interesting for imagination - fascinating, yes - after knowing the whole story finally getting to know the second step... it was really good. thank you <3

p.s. i wish my english was a lot better so i could say everything i think about how amazing you and your writings are in my eyes :(