Comments | harkk: A Walk in the Rain

harkk

A Walk in the Rain

Apr 27, 2010 23:39

Title: A Walk in the Rain
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 338
A/N: my dad's watching a weird french movie on some streaming site and it's slowing the internet connection. i feel like tearing the MioBox apart. ); /edit. thanks to jecca_o9 for pointing out some of my errors. ♥

( “You know, our relationship would be perfect if you could just shut up at the appropriate times.” )

fanfic: jongkey

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harkk April 27 2010, 18:14:20 UTC

:DD i fail at fluff so i'm glad you liked! and well, key loves jonghyun despite his height so i guess they balance out each other. XDD

thanks for reading and commenting dear. <3

jecca_o9 April 27 2010, 18:07:30 UTC

That was really cute. I love the image of Key holding hands in Jonghyun's jacket. There's a fanart of that somewhere on tumblr, if I'm not mistaken. ♥

Just a couple of grammar typos, if you don't mind me pointing them out:
“I only agreed to coming out
come out.

things always look better in the head.
your

harkk April 27 2010, 18:21:29 UTC

O: me wants see fanart. /kicks and whines like a brat.

oh and i've made edits. i love you for pointing out my errors. /showers you with wet kisses. here, have a heart:
♥

thank you thank you for reading and commenting dear. ♥ (and yes i abuse that little heart shaped emoticonthingy)

jecca_o9 April 28 2010, 06:11:45 UTC

I had to look for it again (since my HD crashed last year and everything died), but here it is:
http://i43.tinypic.com/n6s38n.jpg
One of the cutest things everrr.

No problem, I always appreciate it when someone corrects my fics, so ♥!!

harkk April 28 2010, 08:13:26 UTC

oh gosh. i just woke up (it's 4pm now ._.) and this is the first thing i see. i think my heart did a somersault. bah the things jongkey do to me. D:

♥

miss_circle April 27 2010, 19:41:49 UTC

Definitely my type of fiction, quiet and simple. I love it.

harkk April 28 2010, 08:14:07 UTC

:DD i'm glad you liked dear!

thanks for reading and commenting! <3

pixziestikxz April 27 2010, 19:44:53 UTC

awwwwwwww. DGFDSGHSFJGDHSF.

socute~ >w<

♥♥♥♥♥♥

harkk April 28 2010, 08:15:08 UTC

your icon's the cutest thing ever. /glomps

thank you for reading and commenting. ♥

pixziestikxz April 28 2010, 19:46:43 UTC

ahahaha thanks. xD

is yours from land before time? 8D

and np at all~ ^^

harkk April 29 2010, 06:39:56 UTC

haha yep it is! LBT is ♥. :DD

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harkk April 28 2010, 08:19:13 UTC

alskdjfhg your comment makes me smile and giggle like a little girl. and yes that Mexican candy thing makes sense. though i really hate this black cherry flavour candy from somewhere i don't remember. it was awful and i thought i was eating crap, not that i've tasted crap before but eh yeah. ok i just typed a chunk of nothingness. yes i'm weird like that.

thank you for reading and commenting dear. ♥