Comments | harkk: A Walk in the Rain

harkk

A Walk in the Rain

Apr 27, 2010 23:39

Title: A Walk in the Rain
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 338
A/N: my dad's watching a weird french movie on some streaming site and it's slowing the internet connection. i feel like tearing the MioBox apart. ); /edit. thanks to jecca_o9 for pointing out some of my errors. ♥

( “You know, our relationship would be perfect if you could just shut up at the appropriate times.” )

fanfic: jongkey

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harkk April 28 2010, 08:20:13 UTC

:DD this oneshot came to me rather unexpectedly so i'm glad you liked!

thank you for reading and commenting! <3

sodonii_chan April 27 2010, 23:42:11 UTC

Aww hehe so cute~
Funny how Key keeps claiming he's not bitching. ♥

harkk April 28 2010, 08:30:54 UTC

well according to key, he was just stating the facts. but then again, it's according to key.

thank you for reading and commenting. ♥

inocentmaknae April 27 2010, 23:55:53 UTC

this was so sweet and cute♥ idek♥

harkk April 28 2010, 08:31:50 UTC

:D glad you liked!

thank you for reading and commenting dear. ♥

kimchislurpie03 April 28 2010, 01:31:00 UTC

LOL, KEY is seriously, girlier than i am. x)
bitch is on his period, woosh, wouldn't want to mess with that. LMFAO.

harkk April 28 2010, 08:36:42 UTC

HAHA. key is manly, yes i believe he is. though he bitches and cares too much about how he looks and shakes his hips like a diva and pms-es now and then, yes key is manly. XDD

nobody messes with key my dear, though he lets his fellow members step all over him and fart in his face. he's a tough softie like that.

thank you for reading and commenting dear. <3

kimchislurpie03 April 28 2010, 20:21:40 UTC

ohoho, barely manly is kim kibum, y/y? LOL.
yeah, cause key is manly while dancing on a pole while shaking his hips. and actually he's quite hot while doing it, and he's the only one who can look hot doing it, so i don't mind! :P

ahahh, d'awwww, key is just a huge marshmallow. ^^

&no prob. :D

salted_taiyaki April 28 2010, 02:20:45 UTC

♥ very cute, very cute. i like the feel of it - really lighthearted, and you can just feel their intimacy through their (rather rough) words. the way they choose to express it was v. nice, ha ha.

doh i love the cheesy little hands-in-pocket thing lkjsdf ♥ killed me. thanks for sharing!

harkk April 28 2010, 08:43:16 UTC

well, i really didn't expect this to come out as cute since i really really fail at fluff so i'm glad you felt that way! :D

ha i bet key secretly loves that cheesy little move too. he's not that blunt when it comes to things like that. XDD

thank you so much for reading and commenting dear. ♥