A Walk in the Rain

Apr 27, 2010 23:39

Title: A Walk in the Rain
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 338
A/N: my dad's watching a weird french movie on some streaming site and it's slowing the internet connection. i feel like tearing the MioBox apart. ); /edit. thanks to jecca_o9 for pointing out some of my errors. ♥

“You know, our relationship would be perfect if you could just shut up at the appropriate times.” )

fanfic: jongkey

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innocently_hot April 28 2010, 03:46:37 UTC
this argument is so cute! so like jongkey and key is not bitching, jjong! you know he's right! kekekek. this is cute. thanks for sharing~

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harkk April 28 2010, 08:44:20 UTC
jongkey is so full of wonders. /sighs. they're always cute around each other! :D

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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shineeblue April 28 2010, 12:09:50 UTC
this is so freakin' cute and adorable... LOLed much at this... but despite key not knowing when to keep his mouth shut... and jonghyun needing to tiptoe when they kiss... i do think, feel and strongly believe that they're relationship is perfect... or at least, they are indeed perfect for each other... <3 <3 <3 i so love jongkey~! ^^

and somehow, all those name-callings and stuff don't seem offending when it's them... it is sorta-weirdly funny and sweet... :))

thank you~! ^^

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harkk April 28 2010, 15:20:33 UTC
jongkey is full of wonders. /nods. though the image of jonghyun tiptoeing for a kiss is strangely disturbing. must hurt his manlypride. oh and name-calling is their form of communication, i'm sure. XD

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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czu_1391 April 28 2010, 13:08:48 UTC
harkk April 28 2010, 15:21:18 UTC
haha! ikr. my fluff always turns out weird. mehhh.

thank you for reading and commenting dear. :DD

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narisa_rei April 28 2010, 14:51:01 UTC
aww~~ what a funny and cute story.. <333
love their interaction..
and i like your icon... just because.. XD

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harkk April 28 2010, 15:24:20 UTC
no one, and i repeat, no one can resist chomper. LBT is like, my ultimate childhood cartoon. it even beats pinocchio. that's saying something cause pinocchio wins dbsk and dbsk's like, part of my heart. ok, i don't make sense. ._.

anyway, i'm glad you liked! thanks for reading and commenting. <3

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narisa_rei April 28 2010, 16:25:25 UTC
huahahah~ you're so cute rambling over Chomper.. XD
but Chomper IS cute..and somehow reminds me of Jjong the dinoboy

btw, you should write more "crack but yet fluffy" fic like this.. <33

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harkk April 28 2010, 17:16:29 UTC
haha, the dino jokes never stop do they? XDD

and i really seriously fail at fluff so thanks alot for the encouragement dear! /flails.

♥♥♥

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ruby_lovegood April 28 2010, 21:30:34 UTC
waaaaaa
I love it :)

keke key's so cute when he said 'I'm not bitching'
and ah, they just love each other too much, even their quarrel makes me smile

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harkk April 29 2010, 06:41:27 UTC
waaaah i'm glad you liked. heee. :DD

jongkey's cute with each other and they're made of wonders. just looking at them makes me smile like a proud mother! 8D

thanks for reading and commenting dear. <3

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