After Life

[harkk]

Title: After Life
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,447
A/N: So, I don't know why I wrote this when I'm on hiatus and have exams in 2 weeks time. D: Comments very much appreciated! (:

Comments

[aaliyah_babygul]

oh fuck. that was so heartbreaking *____* and this made me laugh through tears because it's so Jongkey. I don't even know what to say tbqh. tragic in a beautiful way
Kibum throws a quick glance at the old man on the couch before pouring himself a glass of water. “But I want you to sing to me every day when I die.” Kibum says, not looking at Jonghyun as he drinks from the glass.

“Why would you want that? I thought you said I sucked.”

“So I can laugh at you even after I die.”

“What if I die before you?”

Kibum contemplates for a moment before answering.

“Then I’d dance in front of your grave every day.”

[harkk]

I didn't mean for it to be heartbreaking! Ok maybe a little, but hmm yeahhhh, even I don't know what to say about my own fic. D:

And well, at first I couldn't decide between rap or dance. Heh. But I figured Kibum'd manage dancing better, even at the age of 70+. :DD

Thanks so much for reading dear. (:

[aveunalliv]

;____________;
/too busy crying to properly comment

This was so beautiful T____T
Thank you for sharing <3

[harkk]

DDDDD: don't cry! /hands you tissues.

am glad you liked and thank you for reading and commenting. <3

[srijoni_rhea]

fuuuuuuck this was so depressing, but i loved how it still had the sarcastic snappy jongkey in it. i was gonna quote, but i was gonna quote the same thing aaliyah_babygul did so. yeah. ;~;

[harkk]

haha seems like that part of the fic's really popular. :DD

well, i figured jongkey still be jongkeyish even when they age and become grumpy old men. so i hoped the jongkey dynamics helped neutralize the depressing bits! (:

thanks so much for commenting dear. :DDD

[personified]

nggggghhhhhh that dancing part was so funny ;w; GAHHHH JONGKEY PREVAILS!

[harkk]

XDDD glad that worked out for you! (though initially, i intended for key to rap.)

thanks for reading and commenting dear. (:

[weerainbow]

I saw you posted this only now and I really need to go to bed so I'll be back tomorrow to read it. But I just wanted to know that when I saw your name I was OH SO EXCITED!!!!
I hope you're doing ok ♥♥
*squishes you*

[harkk]

Oh god late reply is really late but I was going through my old fics and I realised I've not replied your comment. What is this blasphemy. ;___;