And he gave that smile the way he knows

[harkk]

Title: And he gave that smile the way he knows
Pairing: Jongkey
Rating: PG 16 for mild mild swearing and sexual references
Word Count: 208
A/N: first jongkey ever. i fail so much. DX comments are really much appreciated. /hides in embarrassment.

Comments

[jecca_o9]

i fail so much
WHAT IS THIS FAIL YOU SPEAK OF. YOU WRITE PRETTY WELL WOMAN. ladskfla;dksflkadf

and very much his. THIS.

And Kibum being a tease, we know he is. <3

Bottom line is, YOU SHOULD WRITE MOAR JONGKEY :D

[harkk]

this IS epic fail! 1. i've never written any jongkey. 2. i'm so new to the shinee fandom. 3. i've never written anything above pg16 either. (inserts mega huge ugly crying face)

and yes i am quite fond of that line too. XDD

i- i'd try to write more? /digs hole and hides there.

thanks so much for reading and commenting dear. <3

[jecca_o9]

1. Well congratulations on your first Jongkey :DDDb I approve lol 2. \o/ 3. Me too. XD

*pulls you from the whole*

[ontokki]

omg this is so good for a first!!!
please write more♥~ i really liked it *_*

[harkk]

!!! /faces flushes with embarrassment. oh goodness you flatter me. this was truly mega fail. DX (i have no idea why but 'mega fail' looks like 'megan fox' to me, somehow.)

i thought i failed at capturing the jongkey essence. hmm yeah. ;_; and i've read your jongkey and asjkdfgh they're so gorgeous. (yeah i'm a sekrit stalker of your fics.)

am really really glad you liked. thanks so much for reading and commenting dear. <3

[ontokki]

rofl mega fail does look like megan fox. hmmm XD

you didn't fail bb. it was wonderful! and ahh thank you >__<''
♥

[pynzrz]

LOL i enjoyed this humour of yours :3

[harkk]

XDDD am so so soooo glad you enjoyed this. (inserts ultra mega gigantic huge toothy grin)

thanks so much for reading and commenting dear. <3

[boomboomlovee]

HI, i think this fic was written really well for a first timer :D
the english you used was totally 8D
& even though it was really short, i think it was really awesome ^^
it's like, short & sweet.
please write more~~!

[harkk]

/stays in hole. eep! i-i'm really embarrassed! oh goodness my face is like, burning right now. *_* this, is seriously nowhere near awesome. /shakes head furiously.

thanks alot for reading and commenting dear! this made me really really happy. <3

[style180]

FAIL? YOU'RE LYING. PLUS THIS IS YOUR FIRST? YOUR WRITING IS GOOD.

don't ever question talent. <3 anyway, i like the emotion this conveys with such little words. short, to the point. sweet. :)

moar jongkey from you or else!

[harkk]

/buries face in hands. guuh all these comments are making me too happy wappy for me own good. i'm seriously nowhere near good. have you read your own writing? *_*

and heh, i can't really write anything more than 300/400 words, much as i'd love to. /grimaces.

am glad you liked it! like, really really glad. /nodsnods. and i'd write more jongkey, who could resist? just, forgive me if they're epic fail. DX

thanks so much for reading and commenting dear! you made me day. :DD

[style180]

no, you are good. my writing is nothing special.

it's okay, when jongkey basically write themselves. short is sometimes better anyway. <3 and you cannot resist the jongkey, ever. fail? dfjsdhfjshfj WHATEVER YOU WRITE WILL NOT BE FAIL!

noooo, thank you for making my day. ;DDD