Comments | harlequin_sv: Destiny's Savage Heart by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/danceswithgary">danceswithgary</a></strong> (Part 2 of 2)

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Destiny's Savage Heart by danceswithgary (Part 2 of 2)

Mar 23, 2007 17:49

Title: Destiny's Savage Heart (Part 2 of 2)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 21,492
Cover: Cover #2
Summary: The sky. The sea. Their destiny.

( Destiny's Savage Heart, Part 2 )

cover two

Comments 72

mahaliem March 24 2007, 22:09:14 UTC

This was very well-written. Great job!

mahaliem March 25 2007, 02:20:08 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!

miche_connor March 25 2007, 01:50:10 UTC

This was just awesome. So many good things, and the best? That Lionel went up in flames. Hah!

\o/

miche_connor March 25 2007, 02:22:02 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed! And yes, he really deserved that! :-D

nerowill March 25 2007, 02:39:10 UTC

This was amazing! I love the idea of Lex and Clark as brothers in 16th Century Virginia. It was so neat that K'El didn't have to hide his powers (or his love for his brother). Lionel being killed the first time K'El shoots fire from his eyes is perfect.

And the ending was amazing! I love the idea of the boys coming to Smallville after having been together for 400 years.

nerowill March 25 2007, 02:47:54 UTC

It was very interesting to research the time period and the myths and mores of the Native Americans of the period, especially their acceptance of homosexuality. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks.

taliosi_x March 25 2007, 02:53:46 UTC

WOW! This was a well put together story! I love all the details. You incorparated every detail of the cover into the story,I so love AU's.
This was fantastic!

taliosi_x March 25 2007, 02:58:17 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a great picture to work from, I pasted into the top of my Word doc so that everytime I opened it I was reminded of where I was headed. I hope I did it justice. :-D

taliosi_x March 25 2007, 03:12:03 UTC

you definitely did it justice.=)

teot March 25 2007, 06:20:42 UTC

Wow, you created an amazing world! I loved how SV characters kept showing up, and I loved the cover details you included. Awesome!

teot March 25 2007, 21:55:07 UTC

Thanks! I loved coming up with the story to match the details like the tattoo and mantle, as well as the sword. Gald you provided the opportunity!