Star Child by kayladie (Part 3 of 3)

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Title: Star Child (Part 3 of 3)
Rating: R (for sex/violence)
Word Count: 24,097
Cover: Cover #2

Summary: Alex Luthor's father is enraged by the latest scandal his son has found himself in, so he banishes him to the wilds of Kansas. On the way, Alex's party is attacked by rogue Indians, who are fiercely protecting the land that they believe the

Comments

[enderwiggin24]

absolutely adorable, exciting and funny and romantic!!!!!!!!
i think, my heart might have decided for me already :)

//He could see the light dimming from Kal’s eyes the longer Alex stood not moving, just staring at him. Decision made, Alex stepped up to Kal and reached up to trace his fingers along the side of Kal’s face just the way Kal had so often done to him.

“It doesn’t matter. All that matters is that you’re mine, and I love you,” Alex said.//

yeeeeeeeess, loves conquers all!!!
they are bonded together!! for eternity!

[enderwiggin24]

I love the way you quote your favorite parts, it makes me squee! And of course, love conquers all...it's CLEX! :)

[enderwiggin24]

after reading your story, I was quite sure, which vote to make, when the times come.
but there are, I think, 5 more stories, that are waiting for me :D

and there is expecially this other one, which I like as much as yours, though on a total different aspect...hmmm, I feel torn and excited at the same time, because the race is not over *g*

[enderwiggin24]

Oh, I found the voting very difficult, because all of the stories are so good. To be as fair as possible - and I wasn't even sure if we were allowed to anyway - I did not vote for my own story, so that was at least one less that I had to consider, but it was still hard.

[lapetite_kiki]

Awww, I enjoyed this very much!

[lapetite_kiki]

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it!

[bungee]

Lovely! I love how Clark seems very "dumb savage" at the beginning of this, but slowly builds into a nice, round character. And the few months immediately after Lex's capture had me laughing, because I just knew Clark could understand everything he was saying. Clark's wicked little smiles were a dead giveaway. ;)

[bungee]

Thanks for your kind words! I admit I worried a bit about Kal's characterization since everything took place from Lex's POV, but I'm glad he seemed like a real person in the end. And Kal was very devious, wasn't he? ;)

[nerowill]

Lovely! Dominant, slightly devious Kal is a nice touch!

[nerowill]

I adore Dominant!Clark stories, so the chance to write him as barely civilized was too much to pass up! Glad you liked the story.

[theclexfactor]

Ok, I absolutely adored this. I knew Clark understood everything Lex was saying and laughed out loud when that was revealed and at Lex's embarassment. And the way you effectively blended the Kawatche storyline into this story and why is Native!Clark so frickin hot anyway?!

[theclexfactor]

Poor Alex! He thought Kal was like a confessional, and it turned out he was a sneaky voyeur! Native!Clark is so frickin hot cause he's half-nekkid all the time. *drools a little*