The Artefacts of Life - NC-17 - by shocolate

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Title: The Artefacts of Life
Author: shocolate
Summary: Harry's saving people thing can be inappropriate...
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 15004
Disclaimer: Not mine, unfortunately.
Other Pairings: story begins with existing canon pairings, mention of Ron/OMC.
Author's Note: Very many thanks to emmacmf, for motivating and amusing me and counting my commas - and to the

Comments

[daisymaeevans]

I absolutely LOVE the humor in this - the voices are completely spot-on. The artwork is extremely hot too! Wonderful job both of you!

[napchic]

Thanks so much, you. I was honored to get the chance to art for such a story. :)

[shocolate]

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed it.

[coconut_ice22]

So much to love about this one! So many wonderful lines I would like to quote, but this one made me laugh so much I snorted my tea, it is just so Ron.

"What's a word for so much better than good?" he asked, spreading his legs further and pressing against me.

"Wanking,"

Thank you, thank you for writing this lovely piece. Molly's little cameo was delightful, I could envision the hug she gave Ron when she entered his flat so clearly.

And oh, the art! Wow! WOW! I hope there is another collaboration between you two in the future. Very spiffing results.

[napchic]

I love her amazing dialog skills...she owns witty banter. It was fun to illustrate for such a fantastic story.

[shocolate]

Thank you so much.

I had a gret time traumatising Ron.

[starstruck1986]

*happy sigh*

She rocked and hushed me and stroked my hair and I wished that I was five years old and the twins had done something dreadful to me. Something thoughtless and normal and cruel and mum would give me some chocolate and wipe my nose and send the twins out to degnome.

MY BABY! Bring him here, let him sob into my bosom... after this story, he might not like that so much, but I can hope...

This is just lovely. It reads with the comfortable ease that your Harry/Ron stories always do. The sex and art was delicious.

Well done to you both. x

[napchic]

What a lovely review :)
*grins widely*
*likes contributing to deliciousness*

[shocolate]

thank you for such a lovely comment!

I did enjoy upsetting them...

[secretsolitaire]

This was an absolute delight! Especially the fact that napchic chose that particular scene to illustrate, GUHHHHH. It's gorgeous.

I felt awful for Hermione in the beginning, but I enjoyed watching Ron figure things out for himself, complete with insulting the people he loves best, LOL. Loved the sex scene when they finally got there -- especially the positioning. :-)

[napchic]

That scene demanded to be drawn! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
:) thank you for the kind comment.

[shocolate]

Many thanks - I did enjoy how stroppy he got - and the sex!!

[imthereadergirl]

I loved this. But...poor Hermione. First a gay Ron and then a gay rebound date. All she needs is for Viktor to show up with a boyfriend...

I particularly loved the language in the beginning, and then in the end.

"A year ago, I had the perfect life.

All I've ever wanted.

And never thought I'd have.

Dark Magic and beer and sex."

"I reckon I have the perfect life.

All I've ever wanted.

And never thought I'd have.

Dark Magic and beer and sex.

And Harry."

Perfect ending.

[shocolate]

Thank you so much!!

Yes, there isn't just one perfect.