cut n' paste your first livejournal entry

[havalina09]

my first entry:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/havalina09/2001/12/09/
really kind of sounds like high school more than college, huh?

Comments

[kiik]

ha! that's great. made me giggle.

[unehepginagal]

that was really cryptic.
i was there for it all and i have no idea what it means.

[lilakmess]

yeah, what is that about?

here's my take, in the style of a swc owl:

[unehepginagal]

***Hi Kot,
I'm Gina and I'm your online tutor tonight. I'll be writing my comments within
asterisks (***) so that you'll be able to distinguish them from the rest of
the piece. I'll comment throughout the work and then add some final comments
at the end. I'll also use the slash (/) to indicate where I took the paragraph
breaks to be. Please keep in mind that this is your paper and that you're
absolutely free to do with it whatever you please. I will only make suggestions
and ask questions that I personally feel could be relevant to your work.***

/weekend fun
/dumb faces friday night , laughed at girl on shrooms ***<--ali and i made stupid faces at each other in secret in mockery of liz (presumably the "girl on shrooms") sat on the trundle, none the wiser*** , worked, 5 minutes at a punk rock show, ***<--i don't really know about this "punk rock show," but i assume it was something at the 1/2ass***12 hours of purple hair (no relation to the punk show), 24 hours of black hair ***<--ali had a short stint of purple hair which became a

Re: here's my take, in the style of a swc owl:

[havalina09]

HAHAHA
(the part about the sperm, incidentally, was conjecture based on having found gay male porn on my computer. also, the punk show was indeed at the 1/2 ass, i don't remember who, and i did not get any of my work done.)

[nothalfright]

tha aimless aesthetic indulgence of youth makes me nostalgic