It's All Relative Chapter 31

Sep 09, 2010 10:20

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wilmarth13 September 9 2010, 14:55:31 UTC
First post? Must be my lucky day, and everyone else is too slow from lack of coffee!! I really like this update, and I am glad that someone is calling Caroline on her BS. I look forward to where you are going with this story, no matter how many '-ish' it takes.

Can't wait for more!
Jess

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 15:44:36 UTC
Jessie? Changing your icon? Messes with my sense of reality, and you know how precarious that is.

Thank you honey. I'm so happy you liked it.

What's that? Oh right. The librarian's scowling at you now. Good girl.

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bontivia September 9 2010, 15:01:48 UTC
another great update. I really love this story. And the doc is a hoot!

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 15:45:48 UTC
Thank you. I like the doctor too--she barges in all the time, so I must..

Glad you're enjoying it and thank you for writing.

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xenavirgin September 9 2010, 15:08:09 UTC
Hawk! Oh my, I must just say Shechoach! Well done!!

That was absolutely wonderful the interplay between Caroline and Susan Allen that's a spot on life lesson. Damn you've tempted me to nick that for my Sermon next week for Yom Kippur, heheh, but that would just be one more sin for me to atone for, oy.

LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDD it.!

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 16:00:32 UTC
Nick away, XV. It's not strictly nicking if you have permission, is it? (laughing)

I'm so happy you liked it, XV. Generally and because you are one of the people I thank God for.

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kdsusa3 September 9 2010, 15:52:14 UTC
YAY!!!!!! I love your updates, and your characters. Thank you for the little foray into your world. I enjoy every word.

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mirandafan September 9 2010, 16:17:31 UTC
Great update. And I am totally delighted that someone is giving brat Caroline the long over due spanking that she's been asking for. Even if it's just with words! Miranda needs to stop trying to be the girls friends & start truly being a mother. I think Dr. Allen is a riot, and the interplay with Wanda, Carlo & JC was great. Looking forward to the next installment.

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 18:37:48 UTC
Well? As the good doctor said, Caroline's her mother's daughter, through and through, which I can't imagine would be easy for either of them. I'm really pleased you enjoyed the chapter and that you like Susan and the Castillo family. I like 'em too, and it shows, I think.

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 18:19:18 UTC
The leaf! Thank you, sweetie,for continuing to read. I appreciate it so much.

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pure_ecstasy6 September 9 2010, 16:07:26 UTC
This was a great update. I really like Dr. Allen. =) Keep up the great work!!

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hawkbehere September 9 2010, 18:22:27 UTC
Thank you! I like Dr. Allen, too. I had to give her a husband so I wouldn't stray (laughing...)

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